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Serenity Awakened

Summer’s sizzle Eventually begins to expire. Revelries of the raspberry-seasoned days I’ve respired soon will be Eclipsed by Nuances of a new serenity. Impinging on August’s lethargy-inducing ways and Tip-toeing in, wearing her Youthful still-green garb . . . Autumn elegantly enters! Wandering wistfully from September into October, she Awakens nostalgia in me! Kaleidoscope colors Embroidery trees brightly as Nature surrenders so beautifully to Ebbing embers of sunbeams which paint ever-hastening twilight splendors - Disappearing at last into the calm gray of the first snow-FALL. Aug. 25, 2020

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Edward Ibeh

Date: 10/1/2020 1:53:00 PM

Congratulations for finally placing with this poem, Andrea:-) I also did a Serenity Awakened acrostic which placed. Beautifully done!

John Watt

Date: 10/1/2020 8:52:00 AM

Lovely words, congrats on your win!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/1/2020 7:29:00 AM

Congrats on your winning entry. This is exquisite. A lovely verse :) God bless you dear friend with all your heart desires

John Hamilton

Date: 10/1/2020 7:24:00 AM

An excellent write Congrats Andrea on another win!

Robert Warlov

Date: 8/29/2020 6:11:00 PM

"Raspberry Revelries" and "Sunbeam Embers" grant inspirational "points of departure".

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/28/2020 11:54:00 PM

Lovely acrostic. Wow! So gorgeously done.

John Watt

Date: 8/25/2020 10:25:00 PM

"Nuances of a new serenity". I know Regina will love this, you have so perfectly captured her theme (I think, anyway). Another favorite theme of yours, I think, the change of seasons. Love this acrostic, I sense a win!

V. Deepa

Date: 8/25/2020 7:30:00 AM

Amazing acrostic poem you've created with smooth flowing emotions dear Andrea mam.:-) Seasons peeping into your work is captivating.. Good luck in the contest.Keep inspiring.Have a lovely day.Much love:-)~Deepa

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/25/2020 6:00:00 AM

A breathtaking write, Andrea:) you have captured the season's beauty well:)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/25/2020 3:48:00 AM

Beautiful capture of changing seasons, Andrea.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/25/2020 12:56:00 AM

- A beautiful poem, Andrea ... now autumn is approaching too fast :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)