Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Poet Ottava rima

Serenity and Sexiness

The warming glow that brings my heart abloom,
A fireplace with silent flickering
My passions flowing in a low-lit room,
Oh, take my pen and write, muse whispering.
Soft, quiet thoughts embracing songs, consume.
Engrossed, dramatic shadows shimmering.
Endorphins gleaning precious words, oh soul –
Serenity and sexiness made whole.

© February 6, 2011
Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Written for Poetry Soup Member Contest: SEXY! 
Sponsored by: nette onclaud

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Cecilia Macfarlane February 13, 2012 at 9:53 AM Wonderful write, congrats on your win!

Nette Onclaud February 10, 2012 at 10:33 PM now this kind of heightened mood so gently yet subtly expressed is so sexy, dane... congrats on your win in my contest! :)huggs! Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen February 11, 2012 at 1:42 PM Thank you so much, Nette for choosing my poem for such a high honor. And your comment really made my day. It made me feel special. So, thank you very much for that, too.

Debbie Guzzi February 10, 2012 at 3:09 PM Ohhh yes Danie lovely meter too! Someones very lucky Light & Love & Congrad's

Olusegun Arowolo February 10, 2012 at 12:56 PM Nice write,beautiful form,Dane.As passion flows in a low-lit room,oh soul-serenity and sexiness made whole.....I love this lines...Congrats on your win,Dane.You deserved it.......

Samual Ronthorpe February 10, 2012 at 11:54 AM Very creative write. Congrats on your win in Nette's contest.

Carol Sunshine Brown February 10, 2012 at 11:41 AM A belated congratulations on your placement in Nette's "Sexy" contest Dane Ann. Love, Carol

Kash Poet February 10, 2012 at 11:26 AM Congrats Dane Ann on your win.Beautiful poem.

Joe Flach February 10, 2012 at 9:31 AM Nicely done, Dane Ann. Beautiful words, describing a lovely scene - the poetry itself, I find, to be sexy as well. Joe

Carrie Richards February 10, 2012 at 9:24 AM I love the setting....you make me want to be there with my muse whispering to me! Lovely poem, Dane Ann!! Congratulations!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 10, 2012 at 8:38 AM congrats Dane Ann on a spectacular first place win for this sexy entry luv..

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl February 10, 2012 at 7:45 AM Congratulations Dane Ann xx

Jon Arno February 10, 2012 at 6:54 AM Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Great write. Best, Jon