Serenity

We are enclosed
in this room
this sanctuary
our imagination
our desires
becomes our existence
everything else
the universe
is missing out...

Late night is here
midnight our beloved
words fade
dreams come alive
destructive analysis 
of our day is done
we lay in the ruins
of our pleasures
we possess
the serenity of trees...

This night
the shadow maker
shapes forever
our shadow bodies
sacred rivers
places of pilgrimage
two temples
dual but one...

Only our eyes speak
we drink the air
with our breathing...

We are still
silent as flowers
for this will begin
the night birds singing...

Suddenly
with her kiss
my body
becomes a candle
touched by fire...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Deschler Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 4:06 PM
A very beautiful description of the serenity of sensuality. A deep and touching poem written straight from the heart. Fantastic work, Ken!...I have also written a poem titled "Serenity"...Thank you for the kind comments, as always! :)
Carroll Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 4:12 PM
Hi Kelly, Thanks for reading this one today.. Ken
Hendricks Avatar
September 17, 2013 at 11:53 AM
It's indeed a serene scene you've described here, Ken. Good poetry, my friend. Licia ;-)
Carroll Avatar
September 17, 2013 at 11:56 AM
Hi Licia, Thank you for the visit and the kind comment. Regards, Ken
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September 16, 2013 at 3:15 PM
suddenly with her kiss/my body becomes a candle /touched by fire-I just loved such verses.Passionate and beautiful!!! Re yr typo in my comment..dnt worry..I do so many typos many times.Im just glad you read my humble verse.
Carroll Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 3:38 PM
Hi Charmain, Thank you for stopping by and leaving a beautiful comment.. Ken
Hamilton Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 2:11 PM
great write Ken enjoyed reading it Shadow x smile
Carroll Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 2:14 PM
Hi Linda, Thank you for the kind compliment..Good to read from you.. Ken
Anish Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 12:02 PM
Very beautiful and evocative poem! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Carroll Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 12:13 PM
Hi Matthew, Thank you for your visit..Peace be with you as well.. Ken
Kendrick Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 11:15 AM
Expressive and passionate work..Enjoyed reading htis one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Carroll Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 11:17 AM
Hello Sara, Thank you for reading this one and your visit as well.. Peace and blessings to you... Ken
Adams Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 9:43 AM
beautiful romantic poem you crafted Ken :)
Carroll Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 11:12 AM
Hi Sandra, Thank you for the beautiful compliment.. Ken
Andresen Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 5:35 AM
- Beautiful and soft written,Ken !!! - Have a nice week, in love and peace! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Carroll Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 5:38 AM
Hi Anne, Thank you for the kind compliment. Ken
Manassian Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 1:50 AM
Ken....you are a truly romantic soul...There is nothing more beautiful in life than romance...nothing. This was a delightful read full of beautiful imagery....WOW
Carroll Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 3:02 AM
Hi Eileen, Thank you for stopping by and the lovely compliment. Ken
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