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Serenity

We are enclosed in this room this sanctuary our imagination our desires becomes our existence everything else the universe is missing out... Late night is here midnight our beloved words fade dreams come alive destructive analysis of our day is done we lay in the ruins of our pleasures we possess the serenity of trees... This night the shadow maker shapes forever our shadow bodies sacred rivers places of pilgrimage two temples dual but one... Only our eyes speak we drink the air with our breathing... We are still silent as flowers for this will begin the night birds singing... Suddenly with her kiss my body becomes a candle touched by fire...

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Date: 9/22/2013 4:06:00 PM
A very beautiful description of the serenity of sensuality. A deep and touching poem written straight from the heart. Fantastic work, Ken!...I have also written a poem titled "Serenity"...Thank you for the kind comments, as always! :)
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Ken Carroll
Date: 9/22/2013 4:12:00 PM
Hi Kelly, Thanks for reading this one today.. Ken
Date: 9/17/2013 11:53:00 AM
It's indeed a serene scene you've described here, Ken. Good poetry, my friend. Licia ;-)
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Date: 9/17/2013 11:56:00 AM
Hi Licia, Thank you for the visit and the kind comment. Regards, Ken
Date: 9/16/2013 3:15:00 PM
suddenly with her kiss/my body becomes a candle /touched by fire-I just loved such verses.Passionate and beautiful!!! Re yr typo in my comment..dnt worry..I do so many typos many times.Im just glad you read my humble verse.
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Date: 9/16/2013 3:38:00 PM
Hi Charmain, Thank you for stopping by and leaving a beautiful comment.. Ken
Date: 9/16/2013 2:11:00 PM
great write Ken enjoyed reading it Shadow x smile
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Date: 9/16/2013 2:14:00 PM
Hi Linda, Thank you for the kind compliment..Good to read from you.. Ken
Date: 9/16/2013 12:02:00 PM
Very beautiful and evocative poem! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 9/16/2013 12:13:00 PM
Hi Matthew, Thank you for your visit..Peace be with you as well.. Ken
Date: 9/16/2013 11:15:00 AM
Expressive and passionate work..Enjoyed reading htis one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 9/16/2013 11:17:00 AM
Hello Sara, Thank you for reading this one and your visit as well.. Peace and blessings to you... Ken
Date: 9/16/2013 9:43:00 AM
beautiful romantic poem you crafted Ken :)
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Date: 9/16/2013 11:12:00 AM
Hi Sandra, Thank you for the beautiful compliment.. Ken
Date: 9/16/2013 5:35:00 AM
- Beautiful and soft written,Ken !!! - Have a nice week, in love and peace! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/16/2013 5:38:00 AM
Hi Anne, Thank you for the kind compliment. Ken
Date: 9/16/2013 1:50:00 AM
Ken....you are a truly romantic soul...There is nothing more beautiful in life than romance...nothing. This was a delightful read full of beautiful imagery....WOW
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Date: 9/16/2013 3:02:00 AM
Hi Eileen, Thank you for stopping by and the lovely compliment. Ken

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