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Serenity Wall Mural 8-958 by Komar

Serenity

Quiet mountain lake,
Reflecting the silent sky;
No wind stirs the deep.
My hurried heart slows its pace,
Finding stillness in the blue.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Bloom Avatar
January 12, 2026 at 7:31 PM
I loved reading you poem. Congratulations on your win ??
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 12, 2026 at 11:48 PM
Your kind thoughts are welcoming, thank you.
Kendrick Avatar
January 12, 2026 at 5:38 AM
Congrats on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Sara K
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 12, 2026 at 9:48 AM
With grateful appreciation, William.
Kauffman Avatar
January 8, 2026 at 12:00 PM
So beautiful, hoa'aloha! I feel the stillness, the calm and the spirit of serenity. Having grown up by a lake your beautifully composed words bring back precious memories of mornings with still waters reflecting dawn. Blessings to you on wings of serenity! Aloha!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 8, 2026 at 2:24 PM
I am pleasantly fulfilled by your thought-filled words, malama pono, Aloha, William.
Jones Avatar
January 8, 2026 at 11:34 AM
Wow! This is so soothing! I see why it won! Congratulations!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 8, 2026 at 2:18 PM
I sensed your sentiments with gratitude.
Marc Avatar
January 8, 2026 at 11:30 AM
+Fav
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 8, 2026 at 2:17 PM
I am honored!
Dietrich Avatar
January 6, 2026 at 9:20 AM
So lovely, Hilo
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 6, 2026 at 2:48 PM
Thank you, Andrea.
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