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serenity

for far too long he had been a fighter against God the world as such and mostly combatting himself but wars have no winners and so he surrendered asked for pain insecurity and fears to vanish for good surreal emptiness descended upon his restless soul at last there was space for positive energy and peace

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Date: 7/25/2025 9:21:00 AM
What a powerful write you have here. Great last line... I took a week off the computer and now way behind. Have a blessed day writing away.........
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/25/2025 10:06:00 AM
Thank you Paul. Much appreciated. XXX
Date: 7/25/2025 5:46:00 AM
Ahhh sounds like he found a good place. The only question: will he stay there? Sweet poetry Michael
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/25/2025 10:07:00 AM
Thank you To. He will move forward. XXX

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