Serenity

Woods in deep mist
shallow brook of shimmering slik
unweaves over rocks.
Cooling breeze -- rustling leaves
wind chimes in the nght
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Brown Avatar
September 10, 2008 at 6:40 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup . Please keep writing and posting your poetry. I enjoyed reading your poem today and hope to read more soon. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
August 25, 2008 at 7:14 PM
Perhaps you are new to Poetry Soup, however, your poems have caught my attention. This is lovely!....Carrie
Hwilka Avatar
August 25, 2008 at 9:31 AM
Thank you for for the complement and I'm glad to meet you.Mike every time you want to talk with someone do you have to keep putting your name and charcters and validate before you can send a comment or answer one?
Jordan Avatar
August 25, 2008 at 6:59 AM
Well Tony - welcome to our site - someone as gifted as you will truly be a joy to get to read and know - as far as getting to others poetry just click on their name in blue - great to meet you - God bless
Hwilka Avatar
August 25, 2008 at 1:47 AM
Thank you for the read and your really nice comments. I'm new as of a couple of hours and am trying to figure out what to do. also to read your poetry.
Jordan Avatar
August 25, 2008 at 1:34 AM
Tony thus poem is very beautifully written and leaves one feeling rather at peace inside - Great job - God Bless
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