Serenity

Woods in deep mist shallow brook of shimmering slik unweaves over rocks. Cooling breeze -- rustling leaves wind chimes in the nght

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/10/2008 6:40:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup . Please keep writing and posting your poetry. I enjoyed reading your poem today and hope to read more soon. Love, Carol

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/25/2008 7:14:00 PM

Perhaps you are new to Poetry Soup, however, your poems have caught my attention. This is lovely!....Carrie

Tony Hwilka

Date: 8/25/2008 9:31:00 AM

Thank you for for the complement and I'm glad to meet you.Mike every time you want to talk with someone do you have to keep putting your name and charcters and validate before you can send a comment or answer one?

Michael Jordan

Date: 8/25/2008 6:59:00 AM

Well Tony - welcome to our site - someone as gifted as you will truly be a joy to get to read and know - as far as getting to others poetry just click on their name in blue - great to meet you - God bless

Tony Hwilka

Date: 8/25/2008 1:47:00 AM

Thank you for the read and your really nice comments. I'm new as of a couple of hours and am trying to figure out what to do. also to read your poetry.

Michael Jordan

Date: 8/25/2008 1:34:00 AM

Tony thus poem is very beautifully written and leaves one feeling rather at peace inside - Great job - God Bless