Serenity

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Poet's notes:
08/16/2018

birds twitter about hidden pond comes into view water laps softly

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Date: 8/17/2018 10:00:00 PM

Nature's beauty is breathtaking in your splendid haiku, Mark. Best wishes for a win! ~Susan

Mark Toney
Date: 8/17/2018 11:53:00 PM

Susan, thank you for your kind, encouraging comment!

Date: 8/17/2018 6:26:00 PM

Soft, tender and simply breathtaking. If I close my eyes, I am there in the moment. Nature is very inspiring indeed. :) Brandy

Mark Toney
Date: 8/18/2018 12:10:00 AM

Brandy, thank you for your lovely comment :)

Date: 8/17/2018 12:21:00 AM

A beautifully penned haiku, Mark, the photos make it even more amazing.

Mark Toney
Date: 8/17/2018 12:31:00 AM

Thank you for the lovely comment, Caren. You’ve made my day and it hasn’t even started!