Serengeti Sunset

Driving through the Serengeti plains
twilight started to fall over the land
Then in the blink of an eye night falls
no slow fading of light just darkness

The full moon comes out and reveals
the sky awash with rainbows of colour
all left behind by the glowing setting sun
bathing all of the plains with technicolour

written 08/04/2013

contest  poem about sunset
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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A  Avatar
August 20, 2013 at 9:22 PM
well done Linda, .congrats... love ~SKAT~ ;)
A   Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 5:16 PM
Shadow, a beautiful sunset poem ... congratulations!! PD
Hamilton Avatar
August 20, 2013 at 2:37 PM
Ty Linda hope all is well Shadow x smile
Gorelick Avatar
August 18, 2013 at 1:44 PM
Very beautiful, Id love to see it. congrats. BG
Hamilton Avatar
August 18, 2013 at 3:03 PM
You would love it Barbara so much space and free animals everywhere Ty Shadow x smile
Lamoureux Avatar
August 18, 2013 at 9:01 AM
Sounds beautiful, congratulations Shadow.
Hamilton Avatar
August 18, 2013 at 3:05 PM
Ty Richard it is you should go there Shadow x smile
May Avatar
August 18, 2013 at 8:22 AM
congrats on your win Shadow
Hamilton Avatar
August 18, 2013 at 3:06 PM
ty Joseph Shadow x smile
Gasun Avatar
August 18, 2013 at 5:49 AM
Congratulations on your win my dear friend Shadow. Thank you so much for your very spectacular and outstanding poem. I love it so much and so enjoyed. Thank you so much as well for your full support. Have a blessed day! Big hugs! Love lots, Leonora
Hamilton Avatar
August 18, 2013 at 3:08 PM
hi Lenora Ty so much it was great fun and many good poems Ty for hosting it Shadow x smile
Kithinji Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 3:10 PM
Alas! 'Tis the lions out to hunt ...
Hamilton Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 4:16 PM
Most big cats hunt at dusk not so easy to be seen Ty for reading Shadow x smiles
Sathasivam Avatar
August 4, 2013 at 11:46 PM
Excellent. Beautifully said. Enjoyed. Tfs
Hamilton Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 8:50 AM
hi Ravi ty for visiting my work glad you liked it Shadow x smiles
Ellison Avatar
August 4, 2013 at 5:19 PM
Now this is exceptionally beautifully my dear Shadow! Kudos... big hugs, Jack xoxox
Hamilton Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 8:54 AM
Jack dear Ty both for time and remarks most encouraging Shadow x smiles
Sharma Avatar
August 4, 2013 at 7:14 AM
Many colors you have splashed:)
Hamilton Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 8:49 AM
yes there are so many in East Africa sunsets ty for reading Shadow x smiles
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