Serengeti Hue

The misty morning ~. awakens, lavender hues ~.~ thrive before dawn breaks ~.

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Sharon Tideswell

Date: 8/29/2010 3:16:00 PM

Very nice imagery in this one James ~ Sharon x

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/27/2010 3:02:00 PM

Splendid image of lavender hues emerging through the mist in early dawn, James. Nice haiku! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/27/2010 2:07:00 PM

I can see this early morning from the reading of your words...Keep the creative pen flowing for our enjoyment..Thanks for stopping by my blog and commenting..It is good to be back home again...Sara

Constance La France

Date: 8/27/2010 6:41:00 AM

I have seen photographs of the Serengeti and you have captured its beauty in your words, dear heart~~

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/27/2010 4:38:00 AM

Beautiful aptly titled haiku James.. Hope you are having a great Friday :) Wilma

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 8/26/2010 11:40:00 PM

Very beautiful and serene,dear James.

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/26/2010 10:42:00 PM

beautiful haiku, love it

Nate D.

Date: 8/26/2010 7:17:00 PM

nature's way of saying good moring. a goal waiting the arival of the sun"

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/26/2010 7:03:00 PM

A nice pen picture well worded of the misty morning. James