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Serene Spring

Spring birds croon a new tune Cling not to Winter reveries Sing of blooms, colour zooms Bring back the golden memories Green the view that greets you Seen around butterflies and bees Sheen of light rain delights Serene is the feel of Spring breeze 06.09.2021

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 6/20/2021 6:59:00 PM

Love the imagery and musical feel, simply delightful!

Anisha Dutta

Date: 6/16/2021 11:33:00 AM

VERY GOOD. All the best.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2021 12:19:00 PM

Excellent job with this challenge and you created an amazing itty bitty poem

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 6/12/2021 10:57:00 AM

This is an enchanting verse, Jo. It's in my faves. :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/10/2021 2:16:00 PM

Reads like a winning entry to me. Way to go. I am sure these though short are not so easy to write. I need to try one and see what I can do. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 6/10/2021 3:48:00 AM

Lovely write. God bless you always, Love, Gina

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/10/2021 1:38:00 AM

Who doesn't love spring. My favourite season.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/9/2021 6:58:00 PM

Great lento-ing!! I really want to try this too

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/9/2021 8:59:00 AM

Beautiful. I agree with the last line too. Serene is the feel of the spring breeze. This is a peaceful poem :)

L Milton Hankins

Date: 6/9/2021 8:55:00 AM

Beautiful, calming stanzas, Jo, which is what I think a lento poem should be. Nice work!

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/9/2021 8:54:00 AM

WoW! Jo, What a lovely “ Spring “ lento to view this fine morning. You nailed this contest challenge . You made it look easy, I know first hand that it's not. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-)Alexis

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/9/2021 7:47:00 AM

This is really beautiful, Jo. You aced the rhythm and form.