Joanna Daniel Poet Lento

Serene Spring

Spring birds croon a new tune
   Cling not to Winter reveries
Sing of blooms, colour zooms
   Bring back the golden memories

   Green the view that greets you
Seen around butterflies and bees
   Sheen of light rain delights
Serene is the feel of Spring breeze


06.09.2021

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Michelle Faulkner June 20, 2021 at 6:59 PM Love the imagery and musical feel, simply delightful!

Anisha Dutta June 16, 2021 at 11:33 AM VERY GOOD. All the best.

Andrea Dietrich June 13, 2021 at 12:19 PM Excellent job with this challenge and you created an amazing itty bitty poem

Evelyn Judy Buehler June 12, 2021 at 10:57 AM This is an enchanting verse, Jo. It's in my faves. :)

Sara Kendrick June 10, 2021 at 2:16 PM Reads like a winning entry to me. Way to go. I am sure these though short are not so easy to write. I need to try one and see what I can do. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara

Regina Mcintosh June 10, 2021 at 3:48 AM Lovely write. God bless you always, Love, Gina

Victor Buhagiar June 10, 2021 at 1:38 AM Who doesn't love spring. My favourite season.

Andrea Dietrich June 9, 2021 at 6:58 PM Great lento-ing!! I really want to try this too

Heidi Sands June 9, 2021 at 8:59 AM Beautiful. I agree with the last line too. Serene is the feel of the spring breeze. This is a peaceful poem :)

L Milton Hankins June 9, 2021 at 8:55 AM Beautiful, calming stanzas, Jo, which is what I think a lento poem should be. Nice work!

Alexis Y. June 9, 2021 at 8:54 AM WoW! Jo, What a lovely “ Spring “ lento to view this fine morning. You nailed this contest challenge . You made it look easy, I know first hand that it's not. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-)Alexis

Vijay Pandit June 9, 2021 at 7:47 AM This is really beautiful, Jo. You aced the rhythm and form.