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Serene Shells - Ty

Serene
Dawn green
Bluebells
Seashells
Serene skies reflect pastel dawn green
As bluebell's path lines seashells pristine.

8/09/19

For 'Your Turn for a Tyburn' contest
Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Andrea Dietrich

September 1, 2019 at 7:09 PM

I read below to see what the sponsor said, and he is right. It was deserving of the higher win. Congrats, Michelle.

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 30, 2019 at 7:33 AM

- Congratulations on your great Tyburn poem, Michelle :) - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina

August 29, 2019 at 6:07 AM

Michelle, this is a lovely Tyburn. I accidentally placed this wrong. I am so sorry. This should have placed 2nd. Please accept my apology I will try to contact administration. Thank you for entering my contest...I gave a 4th place rank to ONLY those who have not rhymed the first four words. IDK how this slipped by. Charlie

Michelle Faulkner

August 29, 2019 at 3:36 PM

I appreciate knowing that, Charlie, thanks for placing me in your contest!

M. L. Kiser

August 17, 2019 at 4:16 PM

I can actually see this beautiful scenery from your description, BRAVO!

Rhona Mcferran

August 13, 2019 at 1:14 AM

Delightfully penned! ;)

Michelle Faulkner

August 15, 2019 at 5:28 PM

Thank you so much!

Sandra Adams

August 12, 2019 at 11:19 AM

what a beautiful image....i love nature, especially the beach....nicely painted :)

Michelle Faulkner

August 15, 2019 at 5:28 PM

I like the beach at dawn and sunset the best, thanks for commenting-

Jennifer Proxenos

August 10, 2019 at 11:36 AM

Nature just screams for poets to write poems about the wonder of nature - you have captured a true gem with your poetic creativity! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Michelle Faulkner

August 15, 2019 at 5:26 PM

Much appreciate your kind comment, thank you, Jennifer!

Richard Lamoureux

August 10, 2019 at 9:08 AM

Such a pretty piece.

Michelle Faulkner

August 15, 2019 at 5:26 PM

Thank you, Richard-

Andrea Dietrich

August 9, 2019 at 8:49 PM

this is sure a pretty one. I love seashells.

Michelle Faulkner

August 15, 2019 at 5:25 PM

I do too, especially since it rhymes with my name!

Heidi Sands

August 9, 2019 at 3:19 PM

Beautiful Michelle! I enjoyed this poem :)

Michelle Faulkner

August 15, 2019 at 5:24 PM

Thank you, Heidi'

Connie Marcum Wong

August 9, 2019 at 2:41 PM

Nature is such a gift and always inspires me to create poetry Michelle. This is a very lovely Tyburn that should do well in the contest! : ) xxoo

Michelle Faulkner

August 15, 2019 at 5:24 PM

This is my image of a little beach house at dawn, thanks for your comment!

Gershon Wolf

August 9, 2019 at 2:25 PM

Oh, this is so exquisitely depicted, Michelle. It jumps from your canvas right into Nature! These are hard to do, and you have really penned a masterpiece. Voila! Best wishes, gw

Michelle Faulkner

August 9, 2019 at 2:33 PM

I kept messing with this one, finally just stopped fighting it and let it be what it wanted to be, thanks for commenting!