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Serene Blossom---Kimo

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      Though a lotus quavers from twilight's  chill
               *
      its poised bloom remains serene ~                   

ushering dawn's glory  *



3/22/2019
Writing Challenge 4, March 2019- Kimo Poetry Contest
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Bangalee Avatar
March 31, 2019 at 2:01 AM
it touches me
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 26, 2019 at 10:01 AM
Hello Nette, this poem is beautifully created. I do like this poem. Have a nice day my friend.
La France Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 5:29 PM
Nette, congratulations on your win in my contest, gosh what a pretty poem, I just love everything about it !
Gorelick Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 1:55 PM
Congrats to you! Very nice. BG
May Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 10:37 AM
Congrats on your win Nette
Andresen Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 8:05 AM
- Nette, congratulations on your 1st place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rose  Avatar
March 23, 2019 at 11:03 AM
leave it to a flower to own its power as a poet owns the word, Beautiful entrance to spring dear Nette, hope all is well, sending you a big warm hug .xo
May Avatar
March 23, 2019 at 4:44 AM
Beautifully written Nette..
Neumann Avatar
March 23, 2019 at 3:09 AM
Wow, I love this. Kind wishes, Kai
Vaso Avatar
March 22, 2019 at 10:56 PM
Beautiful, I love flowers and gardens!
Sands Avatar
March 22, 2019 at 4:08 PM
Beautiful Nette! Nice to see today :)
Andresen Avatar
March 22, 2019 at 3:30 PM
- A beauty in both words and image, Nette :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
March 22, 2019 at 3:10 PM
Your poem is as beautiful as the photo..well done, Nette.
Horne Avatar
March 22, 2019 at 3:06 PM
this is truly beautiful - read it twice
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 22, 2019 at 2:55 PM
Gorgeous. <3 Good luck in the contest Nette! xomo
Krutsinger Avatar
March 22, 2019 at 2:45 PM
Gorgeous Kimo, Nette. This one is a winner.
Cunningham Avatar
March 22, 2019 at 2:34 PM
Beautiful image Nette. Good luck. Have a nice weekend. Tom.
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