Serene

Gentle waves arrive Quietly and serenely- All alone at dusk.

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Caryl Muzzey

Date: 3/10/2010 8:52:00 AM

A beautifulful Haiku, congratulations on placing in the contest. Caryl

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/17/2010 4:29:00 AM

nice one Daniel. congratulations!- Robert

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/16/2010 5:34:00 AM

Congratulations Daniel, on your success in Raul’s “Seascapes” poetry contest with this creative and serene haiku. Your poem is outstanding. Keep the winning words flowing! Smiles, Dane Ann

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/16/2010 5:25:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Seascape contest Daniel. Love,Carol

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/15/2010 8:04:00 PM

Dear Daniel, My congratulations on your win in Raul's "Seascapes" Contest! Great work, my friend! Peace,Audrey

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/15/2010 3:20:00 PM

Congrats Daniel on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. a wonderful win for a wonderful write.. glad to see your name on the winners list now... luv.. Linda-Marie..

Raul Moreno

Date: 2/15/2010 2:20:00 PM

Daniel, congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 2/14/2010 9:38:00 AM

it feels smooth and soundless, ja i feel the ocean could move with out sound sometimes at night.