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Serendipity

SERENDIPITY commercialized like dippity-do — the extra hold hair gel. sounds like supercalifragilisticexpialidocious* so fresh; and clean — a nonsense word used when you have nothing else to say. and let’s not forget serenity now** yelled uncontrollably when you need to calm down. one more, s’il vous plaîs:*** serene, dip, dippity-doo-da-yay! s-e-r-e-n-d-i-p-i-t-y yes, i love to play with you my loquacious love. defined as: (remember to say it fast and pedantically) the faculty or phenomenon of finding valuable (take a breath) or agreeable things not sought for**** i close my eyes in a honeysuckle fog. the scent surprises me, dabs on my pulse points. !!!!!!!! i open my lids, and a friend, i haven’t seen in eons, says hello. !!!!!!!!! my husband twirls me about “serendipity” he says as he whisks me away to Paris. !!!!!!!!!! thus, i shall place my favorite word in your hand like a flutterby, i mean, of course, a butterfly — the prism-break of r-o-y-g-b-p and moonbows. perhaps... i’ll look into my palm and see your word placed there. i draw a breath, my heart races — and yes — it’s serendipity all over again. 8/16/2019 Favorite Word Poetry Contest Sponsor: Chantelle Cooke *Mary Poppins **Seinfeld ***s’il vous plaîs - (sel-vü-ple) French meaning “if you please” ****from Merriam-Webster
You might wonder about my use of flutterby. My brother used to give this word as a one word clue to get me to say butterfly.

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Date: 8/18/2019 9:47:00 AM
I liked your poem. Reads like a winner to me. As a wordplay freak, I was impressed also with flutterby as a butterfly clue. Awesome!!! Have a great day!!!.........pat
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/18/2019 1:57:00 PM
Thank you, Pat!
Date: 8/18/2019 1:06:00 AM
An unusual and truly poetic wrk, Kim. Good one, Panagiota
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/18/2019 7:19:00 AM
Thank you, Panagiota!
Date: 8/17/2019 1:58:00 PM
Great poem, Kim!:-) Definitely a great word! It's my favorite also, but I've already written a poem titled "Serendipity"(on page 7), so I had to use a word I love just as much, "Inconsequential":-) I know you've got a winner with this one, so congrats!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/17/2019 2:43:00 PM
We will see! Thank you, my friend!
Date: 8/17/2019 9:18:00 AM
"one more, s’il vous plaîs:*** serene, dip, dippity-doo-da-yay! s-e-r-e-n-d-i-p-i-t-y yes, i love to play with you my loquacious love." How does anyone come up with this stuff? Oh, yes I remember. You are Kim. I love this word, my friend, and this poem!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/17/2019 9:47:00 AM
Thank you, my fun and laugh-out-loud friend! :)
Date: 8/17/2019 1:11:00 AM
Kim, The palms of a prismatic joy-filled heart, all yours. Forgive my jealous nature. I bow to your rainbow, my Goddess of prose. -Richard
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/17/2019 7:36:00 AM
Thank you so much, dear poet Richard!!

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