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Serenade for The Trees

The trees are beginning to turn inward towards sleep and are letting go of leaves dressed in their funereal finery of yellow, orange and red. They fall like severed wings. The heavy shade that for months has kept the avenue cool in the heat, is slowly dissolving into light. Something in me is struggling to hold onto what is slipping away. The green vibrancy that canopied my way, flowers in their lush spill, the warmth that lingered on the breath of evenings as you would find in the soft whispered air resting on the lips of lovers. Soon, all will pass. The night is coming on. It's growing colder. The last excited yells from children are being pulled away by parents from the darkening reaches of the park. Birds are becoming quiet. I don't want to leave just yet but will wait to see the last light of the sun say goodbye to the tops of the trees. Then, it will be time for me to go.

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Date: 4/9/2024 4:22:00 PM
I thoroughly enjoyed the reflective nature of your poem. The 'fading' aspect brought about a feeling of reflection about the transitory nature of all things and all those brief, transitory moments we experience. Your poem resonated with me on a deep level. The last few lines actually brought tears to my eyes. Thanks for your lovely words. Have a splendid evening, Sara
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/11/2024 2:38:00 PM
As I mentioned in my response to Daniel, for me Autumn comes with an air of sadness. It reinforces the transitory nature of existence, the need to let go. Your comments Sara echo the mood. Do hope, the feelings I imparted in the poem, though a little sad, are lifted by the implied joy of being alive in the moment, able to experience beauty however fleeting this may sometimes be. Thankyou my dear Sara.
Date: 4/9/2024 6:31:00 AM
Hello Paul, As I read your words, I felt a reflection of life's transient beauty and inevitable passage of time. I loved the imagery of autumn's melancholic embrace; the fading vibrancy of nature and the impending darkness stirred a profound sense of introspection. Like the trees shedding their leaves, I grapple with fleeting moments and reluctance to let go. Your eloquent portrayal of nature's transition mirrors the phases of human existence. Wonderful essence of fleeting beauty with such evocative verses. - Blessings, Daniel
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/11/2024 2:21:00 PM
I always find Autumn a sad time, reflection invariably turns to the letting go. The beauty of the season, its color, comes at a cost thus mirroring life as you so eloquently pointed out in your valued comments. Thankyou my friend.

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