Serenade

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your song soared to the sky in one magical night as you serenade me ~ till dawn love flowed 25 April 2023 Traditional Cinquain Poetry Contest Sponsored by Sotto Poet 1st place A Brian Strand No. 1212 Poetry Contest 5th place

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Speaks Volumes

Date: 7/27/2023 6:45:00 AM

Sensational. Congratulations.

Thompson Emate

Date: 5/17/2023 7:56:00 PM

A lovely cinquain poem. Congratulations!!!

Anisha Dutta

Date: 5/14/2023 7:10:00 AM

Enjoyed. Sure to try your contest. Have Good Days.

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 5/12/2023 5:06:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your top-place winning poem. Very romantic - attractive poetic form! Love ~ Mala

Len Gasun

Date: 5/12/2023 2:21:00 AM

Such a sweet and romantic poem/song my dear poet friend JCB. I like it a lot. A fine example for your contest. Thanks a lot for sharing. Blessings to you always and your writings. Hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/11/2023 12:55:00 PM

Ahhh, I remember this one. Your example for a cool contest now!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/1/2023 10:52:00 PM

Very good, Brul:)

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/1/2023 6:33:00 PM

lovely poem ~

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/1/2023 11:10:00 AM

Oh what a beautiful, romantic song, JCB! You have crafted a metaphor write of delight! Congratulations on your well deserved win! Grace and peace to you my friend!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/30/2023 4:26:00 PM

Back with my congrats, my friend.