JC Brul Poet Cinquain

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Serenade

your song
soared to the sky
in one magical night
as you serenade me ~ till dawn
love flowed


25 April 2023

Traditional Cinquain Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Sotto Poet
1st place

A Brian Strand No. 1212 Poetry Contest
5th place

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Eve Roper October 4, 2025 at 9:12 PM magical night of music... made love flow... great example.

Speaks Volumes July 27, 2023 at 6:45 AM Sensational. Congratulations.

Thompson Emate May 17, 2023 at 7:56 PM A lovely cinquain poem. Congratulations!!!

Anisha Dutta May 14, 2023 at 7:10 AM Enjoyed. Sure to try your contest. Have Good Days.

Malabika Ray Choudhury May 12, 2023 at 5:06 AM Back with Congratulations on your top-place winning poem. Very romantic - attractive poetic form! Love ~ Mala

Len Gasun May 12, 2023 at 2:21 AM Such a sweet and romantic poem/song my dear poet friend JCB. I like it a lot. A fine example for your contest. Thanks a lot for sharing. Blessings to you always and your writings. Hugs

Andrea Dietrich May 11, 2023 at 12:55 PM Ahhh, I remember this one. Your example for a cool contest now!

Joanna Daniel May 1, 2023 at 10:52 PM Very good, Brul:)

Line Gauthier May 1, 2023 at 6:33 PM lovely poem ~

Sam Kauffman May 1, 2023 at 11:10 AM Oh what a beautiful, romantic song, JCB! You have crafted a metaphor write of delight! Congratulations on your well deserved win! Grace and peace to you my friend!

Andrea Dietrich April 30, 2023 at 4:26 PM Back with my congrats, my friend.

Sara Kendrick April 30, 2023 at 4:46 AM Congratulations on this winning work in Lasaad's contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing. Sara

Malabika Ray Choudhury April 29, 2023 at 6:02 PM Congratulations on your shining win - lovely poem - Best wishes ~ Mala

Linda Alice Fowler April 29, 2023 at 11:08 AM Congratulations on your win! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen April 28, 2023 at 11:51 AM - Lovely written, JCB :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith April 28, 2023 at 8:12 AM Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading it again. "Lovely" Have a blessed day/weekend................

Valsa George April 27, 2023 at 7:29 PM Congratulations Jez on your first place win.

Sotto Poet April 27, 2023 at 6:10 PM Thank you so much for sharing your amazing poem in my Poetry Contest.  Congratulations on your win

Paula Goldsmith April 25, 2023 at 9:08 AM A lovely Cinquain write. Good Luck. Have a blessed day writing away................

Valsa George April 24, 2023 at 9:26 PM Lovely cinquain ! How well you have aligned song with love. All the Best!

Andrea Dietrich April 24, 2023 at 3:45 PM Wonderful cinquain!

Anne-Lise Andresen April 24, 2023 at 12:41 PM - Beautifully written, JCB :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs