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Sequoias In the Wild

pines fragrance the woodland with their rugged air is crammed with a pungent aroma Branches of redwoods arching to the skies like the cleansed breath Knotted stems unspoiled Grows.
A Tetractys poem is a form of poetry consisting of at least 5 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 10 syllables (total of 20) Written: January 3, 2022
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Skelly Avatar
January 7, 2022 at 2:17 AM
Atmospheric and hauntingly beautiful...Delice
Kavanagh  Avatar
January 4, 2022 at 12:45 PM
Wonderful descriptive writing Lasaad, and to get such a message across in such a difficult form, just adds to the power of these mighty trees, brilliant, cheers David
Pandit Avatar
January 4, 2022 at 6:00 AM
Beautiful images of nature, Lasaad. Enjoyed your scenic descriptions.
Andresen Avatar
January 4, 2022 at 2:42 AM
- A beautiful description, Las - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Buhagiar Avatar
January 4, 2022 at 1:08 AM
Nature always give us the best.
Bowden Avatar
January 4, 2022 at 12:42 AM
I love old growth trees. Just magical. Well done.
Kannan Avatar
January 3, 2022 at 9:13 PM
Lovely imagery in this cute tetractys... Beautifully penned and I also love the picture...
George Avatar
January 3, 2022 at 7:54 PM
This woodland is beautiful with the aroma of pines, branches of redwoods arching to the skies and knotted stems ! A great visual !
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