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pines fragrance the woodland with their rugged air is crammed with a pungent aroma Branches of redwoods arching to the skies like the cleansed breath Knotted stems unspoiled Grows.
A Tetractys poem is a form of poetry consisting of at least 5 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 10 syllables (total of 20) Written: January 3, 2022

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Date: 1/7/2022 2:17:00 AM
Atmospheric and hauntingly beautiful...Delice
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Date: 1/4/2022 12:45:00 PM
Wonderful descriptive writing Lasaad, and to get such a message across in such a difficult form, just adds to the power of these mighty trees, brilliant, cheers David
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Date: 1/4/2022 6:00:00 AM
Beautiful images of nature, Lasaad. Enjoyed your scenic descriptions.
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Date: 1/4/2022 2:42:00 AM
- A beautiful description, Las - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/4/2022 1:08:00 AM
Nature always give us the best.
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Date: 1/4/2022 12:42:00 AM
I love old growth trees. Just magical. Well done.
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Date: 1/3/2022 9:13:00 PM
Lovely imagery in this cute tetractys... Beautifully penned and I also love the picture...
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Date: 1/3/2022 7:54:00 PM
This woodland is beautiful with the aroma of pines, branches of redwoods arching to the skies and knotted stems ! A great visual !
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