Sequence-Verge of Life

Dead
nettle,
cow parsley,
a high rise weed-
feed,
seed-
fulfil
desires of
other's verdant
need
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Moreno Avatar
February 22, 2009 at 9:42 PM
Nice stream of words is this lanterne. Great work Brian...Raul
Johnson Avatar
February 22, 2009 at 7:49 AM
Thank you Brian for your comments. I tried to find what you meant by phonal couplet. Couldn't find it. Hope I qualify. You have such interesting contests I feel obliged to try. This is an interesting form too. Love, Joyce
Higgins Avatar
February 22, 2009 at 5:58 AM
Your Brain cooked up another clever one Sir Brian. Well done and thanks for the always kind words.
Winter Avatar
February 22, 2009 at 5:49 AM
So true and well stated! Love, Shar
Gass Avatar
February 22, 2009 at 4:35 AM
How these survive and spead themselves about. Beautiful poetry, Brian. Clever write from a man of vision! Thank you for sharing them, always. Love, Robin
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