Sequence-The Nature of Things

For
Spring warmth
to unlace,
Winter must lose
face-
for
wholeness
and shalom,
all egos be
gone


For more see John 3:3-6
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Keogh Jr. Avatar
March 4, 2009 at 12:15 PM
Great use of rhyme with unlace and face. I wish I had written this. Well done. Thanks for your comments I always appreciate them. I'm proud to enter your contest. I like the concept. Regards, Gerasrd.
Gass Avatar
March 2, 2009 at 3:59 PM
So lovely in form a the message is perfect. Awesome work, Brian! Love, Robin
Winter Avatar
March 2, 2009 at 9:15 AM
Yes indeed, so beautifully written. Love, Shar
Richards Avatar
March 2, 2009 at 8:43 AM
Beautiful and so much truth and good advice told in this short poem. ~ Carrie
Reynolds Avatar
March 2, 2009 at 3:07 AM
Indeed, only one way. brillaint, I just love your lanterne sequenses. love, Kristin
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