Brian Strand Poet Cinqku

Sequence-Still Birth

fleeting
images
as crystalline
hallucinatory
visions;
lying
as flotsam,
washed by the tide,
transotory mayfly
that hide
within
my mind's eye-
until captured and penned..
then die

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Sara Kendrick November 12, 2009 at 2:40 PM Interesting last five lines. Thanks for the comments on my poems. Keep writing. Sara

P Sheart November 9, 2009 at 3:51 PM Brian, excellent imagery here within this beautiful poetic write. Very evokotive indeed! Many blessings to you and yours. Love Light Patty

Debbie Guzzi November 9, 2009 at 9:58 AM very evocative a nice write...good imagery too! Very very nice! LIght & Love

Jared Pickett November 9, 2009 at 8:22 AM Well penned Brian... You take an interesting direction in your approach... Different, unique and appealing to the eye.... Wonderful write as always friend...:JP}

Sean Kelly November 9, 2009 at 4:27 AM But , the words live onnnnnnn . Well penned , as ever . Rgds from J R Hartley ... ( Do you remember that old ad . ? )...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 9, 2009 at 4:17 AM Magnificent flow of words... such imagery too.. I am still learning all the variations in the poetry world and u are an excellent teacher.. wonderful write, Brian, enjoyed.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"