Sequence-Revelation

Poems
imagined,
verses refined
leaving reality
behind?..
maybe..
the poets
self expression
flying free,declared for all-
to see
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Köhp Avatar
October 17, 2008 at 3:15 AM
I loved this, it's so relevant and sweet. :D Also thank you for your comment about my couplet. It really helped, thanks. Nathaniel
Heck Avatar
October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved this cinqku, Brian. Relevant and perfectly penned. BTW - thank you for your congrats on MY poem OBD'S, however you thanked "Kristin" in your comment on my poem, not me... a Freudian slip...? Anyway, I wish you all the best...although I haven't been commenting as much as I should...I appreciate and read everything you write and keep you in my thoughts. You're a very special poet/artist...Peace always. John
Lakhera Avatar
October 12, 2008 at 10:23 AM
This was very deep write. Superb ending. Love, Chitra
Winter Avatar
October 12, 2008 at 5:57 AM
Flying free - yes, how our words set us free. Incredible write. Love, Shar
Reynolds Avatar
October 12, 2008 at 5:06 AM
Yes! thank goodness for poetry!!!!!!! Amen, well said. Love Kristin
Jordan Avatar
October 12, 2008 at 3:55 AM
This is a great write Brian - I just loved the ending for those certainly are words of truth - God Bless
Anos Avatar
October 12, 2008 at 2:06 AM
ah! a poem afloat.. hehe! Brgds. George
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace