Sequence-On the Left Field

a spice of madness-
                           flavours genius
as in ageing bodies-
                           adolescence lives on
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Moreno Avatar
November 30, 2009 at 11:27 PM
a wonderful and creative write Brian...Raul
Richards Avatar
November 30, 2009 at 6:26 PM
A few in my family fit this example of adolescence in the mind....(perhaps not of the body)...but isn't it wonderful to be young, and free spirited in mind and heart? Love this! ~ Carrie
Kendrick Avatar
November 30, 2009 at 4:54 PM
Definitely in our imagination. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Gorelick Avatar
November 30, 2009 at 11:47 AM
Im smiling...you are right on...In my case..its trying to live on..BG
Sweetheart Avatar
November 30, 2009 at 9:35 AM
Such powerful words from your pen today Brian in this monoku poem.. deep ..very deep .. the meaning is pure and true... thankxxx for sharing this going to my favs right now... blessings ... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
Kelly Avatar
November 30, 2009 at 2:37 AM
Ahhhh yes Brian . I know the feeling , when the spirit is willing , but the flesh .... well the flesh is wrinkled !! . Not sure that I want to be a giddy teen again , but boy , it was good . Great piece and well presented ...
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