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Sequence-January

Just
beneath
winter's coat,
ivy makes a 
home...
the 
blackbird
forages
yet no song we
hear...
day
inches
evening
towards teatime
light...
as
sunshine
melts away
the hibernal
night

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Jenish Somadas

January 5, 2020 at 7:19 AM

Beautiful imagery..

Brian Strand

January 5, 2020 at 8:47 AM

Cheers,thanks Jenish

Raul Moreno

January 14, 2009 at 11:55 PM

Excellent one, I like they way it flows...Raul

Barbara Gorelick

January 14, 2009 at 11:39 AM

Loved this one...'hibernal night" is terrific. BG

Carrie Richards

January 14, 2009 at 8:04 AM

I love this poem....into my favs.!! One of the loveliest poems I've read with such hopeful signs of season's changing. ~ Sincerely, Carrie

Sharon Winter

January 14, 2009 at 5:13 AM

Brian, this is outstanding. Are you accepting Lanterne sequences for your contest too? I am so inspired by this. Thank you. Love, Shar

Kristin Reynolds

January 14, 2009 at 2:59 AM

This is brilliant. I love how you always manage to make forms look effortless, when they are quite hard to pull off, as such - an awesome, visual piece. love, Kristin

Elaine George

January 14, 2009 at 1:25 AM

A lanterne quartet! WOW!!!! I am impressed. Lainie

Sean Kelly

January 14, 2009 at 1:12 AM

Excellently described Sir Brian .... Love the phrase ; " Hibernal Night " ... Rgds from this "Hibernia Knight" .... PS I was about to present a Haiku with a similar word-flow , But I can't compete with this description .....

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