Brian Strand Poet Crystalline

Sequence-Candlemas

Aconites gazing into the sun
'neath catkins dangling,finely spun

Awakened mammals desert their holes
rummaging midst the hazel boles

Long twilight days in winter's shade
tomorrow..brings snowdrops in the glade

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Robin L. Gass January 28, 2009 at 7:29 PM This is beautful, Brian. I love the form. I looked it up and your example is lovely too. Thank you for your thoughtful comments, Love, Robin

Barbara Gorelick January 28, 2009 at 9:29 AM This is so beautiful..I think one of the best I've read in a while. wonderful..the last bit it lovely. BG

Sharon Winter January 28, 2009 at 8:08 AM Very beautiful in imagery and more. Love, Shar

Carrie Richards January 28, 2009 at 7:56 AM This sings in it's beauty. Lovely poem, lovely visuals. ~ Sincerely, Carrie

Christopher Higgins January 28, 2009 at 6:37 AM My mind is lost in the beauty of this Brian. Love the last verse...well done. Thanks for the welcome comments brother.

Michael Degenhardt January 28, 2009 at 5:15 AM Love the couplet rhyme scheme and the imagery created in this piece. Excellent writing. MIchael

Tyler Martin January 28, 2009 at 3:45 AM Nice Poem, I've Never Heard Of A Crystalline. IS It Like A Couplet? Tyler