Sequence Scale - Beam

When
all is
in balance-
everythings
well-
if
all is
amiss and
askew,except
you-
then
glowing
well-being's-
a story you'll
tell
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Jordan Avatar
March 11, 2009 at 1:46 AM
Brian i reckon those are words of truth - Inner peace does carry its own glow - God Bless you, MJ
Loving Iii Avatar
March 10, 2009 at 2:16 PM
sometimes i try to find that ballance on my oun. and sometimes it's just there. you know the feeling. nice write. john h loving iii
Richards Avatar
March 10, 2009 at 1:28 PM
Nothing as wonderful as when things are right with the world! :) Well done, loved this! ~ Carrie
Winter Avatar
March 10, 2009 at 12:10 PM
Inner peace is a beautiful thing and simply exudes from a person like a glow. An interesting and thoughtful write. Lovely. Love, Shar
Gass Avatar
March 10, 2009 at 8:12 AM
This is wonderful Brian. There is much wisdom in these few words. "if all is amiss and askew, except you" is a brilliant line. Memories of when I possessed calmness in very difficult situations do stand out in my mind. There is bit of the philosopher among your other talents, Brian. Well said!
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