Sequence

Sequence



Easy,
Holidays,
Sigh of relief,
Fun and frolic throughout,
Live life !

Short break,
Vacation,
Rejuvenates,
Feasting at our leisure,
Recharged !



Written November 12th, 2014
For contest 'Cinqku poem' by Dr. Ram Mehta

Awarded 2nd place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 11:08 AM
you did GREAT with this one. big congrats.
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 8:29 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Dr. Sharma.
Schumacker Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 9:37 AM
Hi Dr. Sharma, Congratulations on a well thought out, well constructed Cinqku and great win. Take care. Earl
Callus Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 10:09 AM
Enjoyed your take on holidays, Upma. Holidays are meant to be a period of rest, thus coming back with recharged batteries! Often I find I need a second holiday after the first! Congrats on your top placement! #7 // paul
Haight Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 9:25 AM
Hi Dr. Upma, congratulations on your win for you Cinqku. It was very "upbeat," and I especially like the last word, "Recharged." Sandra
Allison Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 5:49 AM
many congrats Dr Sharma:-) hugs jan x
Mehta Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 5:30 AM
I enjoyed your Cinkqu poem and happy to congratulate you on your win,Dr. Upma
Ellison Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 8:19 AM
A brilliant write that conjures up memories of the way it was and hopefully can be or still is again! Loved this one and you my dear doctor! XXX
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 1:08 PM
It's so nice how a few days can recharge us so well. Nicely done Dr. Sharma
Meade Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 12:34 PM
Holidays and vacations emboldens us to live generously -- nicely done. All the best.
Enriquez Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 9:51 AM
Dr Upma: Nicely done. Good luck. Leon
A. Sharma Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 9:53 AM
Thnx Leon for ur kind visit n the like!
Trifiatis Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 9:39 AM
Joyous and uplifting! Good luck Dr. Upma!
A. Sharma Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 9:40 AM
Thnx Demetrios my good friend!
Allison Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 9:31 AM
lovely holidays write good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
A. Sharma Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 9:38 AM
Thnx Jan my true friend!
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