Sequence

Colour
Lights the sky
Sparkling flashes 
Noise of firework display -
Guy Fawkes*


Beneath
House of Lords - 
Gunpowder plot
Failed to assassinate
King James

* failed in an attempt to kill the king and restore  a catholic monarch to the throne of UK.  Nov 5th is bonfire night where an effigy  ( a guy) is burnt in every town and most houses.  Children ask for a penny for the guy, night enjoyed by all.
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Dietrich Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 11:16 AM
Congratulations for your win in this contest, seren. good to finally see your entry.
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 9:06 PM
Congratulations on your win Serena.
Roberts Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 9:39 PM
thank you Brenda......Seren
A. Sharma Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 4:57 AM
Congrats on ur awesome unique take Seren! Congrats on big win!
Roberts Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 9:38 PM
thank you Dr Upma, just a little bit of UK history....Seren
Yvonne Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 6:26 PM
If you can't find it I can send it to you, or send you a new one. love you
Callus Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 10:37 AM
Lovely poem, Seren. I studied about Guy Fawkes at school...he died in 1605. Congrats on your merited win. // paul
Roberts Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 6:04 PM
hello Paul, well you at least knew what I was on about...thank you Seren
Allison Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 8:13 AM
very welled penned Seren you told a story in a few short lines:-) Hugs jan xx
Roberts Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 6:04 PM
Hi Jan thanks so much....Seren
Yvonne Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 6:47 AM
Congratulations on another win today. I hope this inspires you to write a lot more winners. I also wish you would post our collaboration, I think it will do very well. I never post collabs because I do not like identical posts. You did an amazing job with our colab you deserve to post it.
Roberts Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 6:05 PM
Hi Maurice...I will look for it, thought u had it....many thanks....Seren
Mehta Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 5:42 AM
I enjoyed your Cinkqu poem and happy to congratulate you on your win,Seren
Roberts Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 6:06 PM
Thank you Ram ......Seren
Yvonne Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 8:34 PM
Are you familiar with the movie V for Vendata. It was originally a comic book series of twelve books written by Allen Moore. He uses the Guy Fawkes theme heavily in the collection. Excellent write on your part Seren, me thinkets another winner.
Roberts Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 9:38 PM
Think I have that movie here ...will look it out .....Seren
A. Sharma Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 3:11 AM
Great write Seren! Is it some real historical ?
Roberts Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 6:42 AM
Yes it is the truth . Google Guy Fawkes, you will find it....Thanks for stopping by.....Seren
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