Jan Allison Poet Cinqku

Sequence

Malta 
Sweet romance 
Sizzling sunshine
Darling, I want to stay - 
With you

Journey 
Flying home
Suntan fading
Photographs… memories 
Heartbreak


11~07~14
Contest: Cinqku Poem
Sponsor: Dr.Ram Mehta

Syllable checker used – ‘How Many Syllables’ 2,3,4,6,2
~awarded 3rd place~

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Freddie Robinson Jr. January 4, 2017 at 3:20 PM Lovely cinqku poem, Jan. Those moments you want to last so much longer. Heartbreak as you say. Sweet bitter love. A cool poem. Happy New Year. May love light your path to peace. Jan Allison January 6, 2017 at 2:52 PM Thanks Freddie I'd forgotten all about this poem - have been to Malta 4 times now ... no holiday romance though my hubby wouldn't let me lol:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich December 14, 2014 at 11:13 AM LOved yours, and am glad to see it on the winners' list. congrats, jan. Hope to get a newsy letter from you soon! Jan Allison December 14, 2014 at 11:40 AM thanks Andrea:-) hugs jan xx

Brenda Meier-Hans December 11, 2014 at 8:59 PM Ah, so nice to read this Jan. Congratulations on your win. Jan Allison December 13, 2014 at 5:00 PM Thanks Brenda:-) Hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 11, 2014 at 4:49 AM Oh Jan u r not out of ur memories of Malta yet! I envy u that u met Paul ! Congrats on huge win my friend! Stay blessed! Jan Allison December 13, 2014 at 4:58 PM Thanks so much Dr Sharma:-) Hugs jan xx

Earl Schumacker December 10, 2014 at 10:02 AM Hi Jan, Very clear balance and good story in this one. Congratulations on an excellent win. 7 again. Have a great day. Earl Jan Allison December 10, 2014 at 11:19 AM Thanks as ever for your continued support Earl:-) Hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper December 10, 2014 at 9:11 AM Beautiful, from a wonderful meeting, to a break up :'( a 7 . Blessings to you Jan Allison December 10, 2014 at 11:19 AM Although I went to Malta recently it is purely a fictional write:-) Hugs Jan x

Paul Callus December 10, 2014 at 8:42 AM It's lovely to be reading this holiday poem once again...brings back sweet memories. I see that it brought you luck in the contest....congratulations!!! hugs // paul Jan Allison December 10, 2014 at 8:45 AM Brings back lovely memories Paul and dreams of warm days! hugs Jan xxx

Dr.Ram Mehta December 10, 2014 at 5:38 AM I enjoyed your Cinkqu poem and happy to congratulate you on your win,Jan Jan Allison December 10, 2014 at 5:42 AM Many thanks Dr Mehta thank you for running such an enjoyable contest:-) Hugs jan x

Joseph May November 12, 2014 at 8:49 AM Great write Jan...best wishes in the contest Jan Allison November 12, 2014 at 9:11 AM Thanks so much Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Scott Thirtyseven November 11, 2014 at 11:59 AM Love it, a great read. What an interesting looking form. Best of luck in the comp. Jan Allison November 11, 2014 at 12:08 PM Thank you Scott:-) Hugs Jan x

Kayod5 Kayode November 9, 2014 at 1:00 AM This is cool Jan, goodluck in the contest. Jan Allison November 9, 2014 at 3:26 AM Thanks Kayod5:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich November 9, 2014 at 12:09 AM Hi, Jan, just stopping to say hi. I dare not even look at emails. Just catching up here and need to get off soon. Hope all is well with you this weekend! Jan Allison November 9, 2014 at 3:26 AM Thanks Andrea:-) all is fine:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus November 8, 2014 at 4:15 PM This Cinqku's content is lovely, touching and sad all in one. It's a pity your romance with Malta only lasted one week... but the promise of a return does make up for it! You are missed:) hugs // paul Jan Allison November 8, 2014 at 5:57 PM Thanks Paul - guess I have a lot of inspiration from my amazingholiday and I have you and your wonderful family to thank for making it so so special:-) hugs Jan xxx

M. L. Kiser November 8, 2014 at 2:27 PM I like this; good luck with the contest. Jan Allison November 8, 2014 at 5:58 PM Thanks so much ML:-) Hugs Jan xx

Shadow Hamilton November 8, 2014 at 10:54 AM it sparkles with romance Jan with a dollop of disappointment gl in contest hugs Jan Allison November 8, 2014 at 11:22 AM Thanks Shadow:-) Yet another first attempt:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jasmine Cruz November 8, 2014 at 3:48 AM Great poem Jan excellent penned Jan Allison November 8, 2014 at 5:04 AM Thanks jasmine:-) hugs jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma November 8, 2014 at 3:31 AM Wow Sweet n beautiful Jan! I think it has lot to do wid your meeting with Paul, that inspired this superb creation! Gl in contest! Jan Allison November 8, 2014 at 3:34 AM Oh definitely Dr Sharma. I got so much inspiration from my holiday I think it was the best holiday ever and meeting Paul and his family was the icing on the cake:-) Hugs jan xx

Matthew Anish November 7, 2014 at 11:23 PM I had an island fling with a much younger woman a number of years ago. Heartache is often the order of the day. Nice job! Peace & Love Matthew Anish Jan Allison November 8, 2014 at 3:22 AM Thanks Matthew it is purely a fictitious write on my behalf - we have just come back from Malta and I met Paul Callus from the site - it was a wonderful experience:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich November 7, 2014 at 10:20 PM ahhh, wonderful!!! Jan Allison November 8, 2014 at 3:20 AM Thanks Andrea:-) Hugs Jan xx

David Meade November 7, 2014 at 8:04 PM From emotional highs and grinding lows, life's journey continues -- all the very best Jan. Jan Allison November 8, 2014 at 3:20 AM Thanks David for your support as ever:-) Hugs Jan xx

Gary Bateman November 7, 2014 at 5:47 PM Beautiful Poem here Jan!! Best of Luck in the Contest. Cheers, Gary Jan Allison November 7, 2014 at 5:51 PM Thanks so much Gary thought i would have a go at this form for the first time:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith November 7, 2014 at 4:20 PM This is great Jan...who is that down below...sure seems like a menace....still get through on new poems....hugs Tim Tim Smith November 7, 2014 at 4:27 PM I thought he was lost and just needed some spare change....next poem she'll have to put up a no loitering sign Maurice Yvonne November 7, 2014 at 4:24 PM Yeah Jan already reported the pest down there but poetrysoup said every site needs one simpleton and apparently the guy down there is it. Jan Allison November 7, 2014 at 4:22 PM Not sure Tim ... he looks familiar but I'm not sure - I think some nutter is hacking Maurice's account;-) hugs jan xxx

Sara Kendrick November 7, 2014 at 4:16 PM Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Jan Allison November 7, 2014 at 4:18 PM Thanks Sara I have never tried this form before so thought I'd give it a go:-) Hugs jan xx

Maurice Yvonne November 7, 2014 at 4:14 PM Look how adorable your post looks with all my little faces stacked up. What a cutie I am. Jan Allison November 7, 2014 at 4:17 PM Yes you are cute:-) Hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne November 7, 2014 at 4:13 PM I am feeling lazy. I am just going to cut and paste your Cinqku enter it and hope Dr. Metha doesn't notice. Tim Smith November 7, 2014 at 4:36 PM nothing to see here...move along Maurice Yvonne November 7, 2014 at 4:20 PM HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! Fav! Jan Allison November 7, 2014 at 4:16 PM I hope you are favourting this poem I think you like it lol:-) hugs jan xx

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