Sequence-Winter Reflections

Raw stillness bites my soul, retrospects of old flood my mind- memory freezes passion cold

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/29/2009 4:47:00 PM

Thank Carrie for steering me to this intrigueing verse! Light & Love Brian

L'Nass Shango

Date: 12/21/2009 6:34:00 AM

Succinctly equisite

P Sheart

Date: 12/20/2009 4:55:00 PM

Very emotional, deeply felt and powerful dear Brian. Stops one in their tracks. An amazing Lanterne! Love Light Patty

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 12/20/2009 4:38:00 PM

Awesome! Indeed like winter. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your ongoing supportive comments on my poems. Best wishes for a merry Christmas and happy new year 2010! Caroline.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/20/2009 9:25:00 AM

Wonderful lanterne .. I have a great winter reflection outside my window this Sunday as 22 inches of snow has fallen in New Jersey and the world has stopped here for now.. nothing to do but write poetry and watch football... Sunday in America... luv.. Linda-Marie and thankxxx for your kind comments on my poetry..

Sean Kelly

Date: 12/20/2009 9:18:00 AM

C O L D ----- but saying so much ...

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/20/2009 7:49:00 AM

This speaks of so many things, .... as a year comes to an end, we reflect on the scene around us, memories seem more powerful upon the winter landscape. Wonderful poem! A favorite for my selected poems! Merry Christmas, Brian! ~ Love, Carrie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/20/2009 1:55:00 AM

I can see a scene of frozen desolation and white snow and ice covering everything from these words that you have penned. When alone and a memory that is not pleasant comes upon us. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and answering my question on my poem. Greatly appreciated. Sara