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Clouds of fire fall anew, change again my view- Clouds of fire set me free, giving gifts to me- Clouds of fire speak each day, show me what to do- Clouds of fire lead me on, 'til this walk is done. See more @ Acts 2:3/4

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Date: 11/5/2009 6:25:00 AM
well you got me wondering? What causes a cloud to be made of fire? The A bomb? I wouldn't have gotten God out of this but I more than willing to listen? Light & Love Soupmail me
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Date: 11/2/2009 10:41:00 AM
I need to practice this form. It is impressive when you do it. Thank you for your comment on my featured poem. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/1/2009 8:45:00 AM
Refreshed after an extra hour of sleep I feel pretty good today. So I am going to be reading some exceptional poems today. Thank you for sharing yours with us Brian. Enjoyed this read. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/1/2009 8:13:00 AM
Beautiful Brian ... and I can relate today.. its been raining in N.J. for 3 days now.. and this poem gives one much reflection to consider... great write.. keep at it... thankxxx for your comments on my poetry also and for welcoming me so warmly to the Soup... am having a blast!! Linda-Marie
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Date: 11/1/2009 8:07:00 AM
Brian my good friend this is a wonderful Sunday morning poem I must say - Just wanted to stop in a say hello - God Bless, mj
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Date: 11/1/2009 7:30:00 AM
Amazing image tied to a brilliant message, Brian! Surely an awesome lanterne. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/1/2009 5:48:00 AM
Beautiful testimony to your faith, Brain...nice way to start off s Sunday - Tim
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Date: 11/1/2009 3:04:00 AM
Yes, fill me daily with the cloven tongues of fire. Love the approach to the topic. Keep writing. Sara
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