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Sequence-Fall

Dahlia petals on the lawn, dew-sodden in the October dawn Michelmas daisies,limp and old amidst faded leaves,now spotted gold Bright bonfire-coloured leaves all aglow, in Acer Palmantum's Autumn show.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/9/2008 2:22:00 PM
A beautiful visual poem. Very vivid images. Good one. Regards Heidie
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Date: 9/7/2008 10:29:00 AM
Every season has it's beauty. You painted this one brilliant. Love, Shar
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Date: 9/7/2008 10:16:00 AM
I just hate it when fall comes and the beautiful flowers start to die. I know it is the start of another long cold winter. Great write Brian. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 9/7/2008 9:49:00 AM
You painted beautiful autumn colors with your poem! Enjoyable to read!....~Carrie
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Date: 9/7/2008 4:19:00 AM
You have autumn on a string here, Brian - a colourful, crystalline string of fall. Loved loved this! So visually stunning, love Kristin
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