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Sequence-Country Walk

Follow the track with the scenic view, into the wood with a carpet blue. Between clumps of gorse in yellow garb, along a path baked summer hard. Around shadu ponds that teem with life, rush and sedge amidst tall loose strife. Into the meadow,a country stile, contemplating I sit awhile. 2020 version Blossom of baby's breath soft white gorse crusted yellow weeping willow rush patterned lace pastures a pastel green Buttercup, daisy&comely cowslip mingle&mix in fellowship swaying pelts of grass with purple vetch & ribwort plantain Hawthorn & scented woodruff briar brambles sprawl in dogrose so tall above harts-tongue in English rain

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Date: 9/28/2008 9:04:00 AM
Wonderful Brian, nothing beats being outside in the country side. To find a secluded spot and enjoy one's own company and thoughts. Good one. Regards Heidie
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Date: 9/24/2008 2:26:00 PM
Brian- Very nice. Its nice to get away and forget one's troubles in a beautiful setting. Looking forward to reading your works. Michael
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Date: 9/24/2008 8:12:00 AM
I love a walk like this. I'm an avid walker, take one every morning, rain or shine.....that is the one time to relish what nature lives around us. A shame that often the rest of the day one gets too busy to notice. Lovely picture you painted! ~Carrie
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Date: 9/24/2008 5:32:00 AM
A peaceful and inspiring picture you have painted. Could go for a walk like this myself right about now. Love, Shar
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Date: 9/24/2008 3:36:00 AM
This sounds like the perfect sit - the culmination of an inspired walk. Ntohign could be better than a solitary strol within nature's glory. love Kristin
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Date: 9/24/2008 3:29:00 AM
Hey to you, Brian! This sounds like a beautiful and peaceful stroll..what better companion than nature? Love the ending, reminds me a bit of Frost, he also got his vibes and energy from nature. I wish the best to you and yours..God bless! Mikki
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