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So often a poem conceived by me just a moment before sleep, a head to pen leap- just hours old, I bring you, my dear hearts to view, my labours, exclusive and original and new

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 2/7/2010 11:20:00 PM
Very nice I hope you have a nice sleep!
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Date: 2/7/2010 1:00:00 PM
So true Brian the inspiration to write hits at awkward times such as before sleep or riding in a car. I find a lot of times when I don't have a pen. Awesome write. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 2/7/2010 12:16:00 PM
Brian I certainly have missed reading your work. A truly amazing piece that you have penned here. I hope that all is well with you my friend. Always in my prayers, mj
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Date: 2/7/2010 8:22:00 AM
And they are always lovely and poignant and informative and classic and excellent and thought provoking and imaginative and truth filled and expressive and informative and quality ... and usually of the "masterpiece" variety... quite a brilliant write.. Brian.. did I mention brilliant? luv.. LInda-Marie..
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Date: 2/7/2010 3:20:00 AM
A very thoughtful and dedicated work from a poet like you, Brian. Someone could not resist writing down what just pop-up and freshly registered into the mind as tomorrow it will be forgotten. (^_^) Noel Villarosa.
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Date: 2/7/2010 1:20:00 AM
original they are
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Date: 2/7/2010 12:43:00 AM
Brian, I love this! So true how poetry will visit us when all is quiet and we are trying to sleep. You have worded it perfectly! This is going in my favorite file. Blessings, Connie
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