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septmeber

Sometimes the air feels like concrete Weighing my lungs down and filling my veins with stone The world can move so slowly when this happens Every moment an eternity to reflect Inner thoughts become fogged over And the hearts feeling impossible to decipher Once a year I can breathe freely The fall brings a dull environment that comforts the nerves I don’t know why the breath of dying trees and rainy days blankets me But there is no other sensation like it Feeling my lungs drain the density of life

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Date: 1/27/2025 6:34:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 1/25/2025 12:07:00 AM
Interesting how you put this together. I enjoyed the depth and the whimsical flow like the fall breeze.
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