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September's Quietude

As September shadows appear All creatures prepare for winter days to come No calendar to tell them of advancing time They just know it was planned that way One by one the leaves of crimson and gold Of dying browns fall from maples, oaks upon the ground A note of regret, a bit of melancholy enters hearts At the first hint that summer is over That winter's voice is soon to be heard The shadows of September whisper Final vows to the dying year But seasons come and go, melting so noiselessly Significant in their silences One into the other That our thoughts keep forward There is a note of permanence in all the moves of nature She goes on, mindful of man and all his dreams of spring awakening In honor of Brian's "One For September"

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Date: 9/21/2011 9:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's sponsored contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/18/2011 9:43:00 AM
CONGRATS CARRIE ON FIRST PLACE WIN WITH BEAUTIFUL LINES LUV..
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Date: 9/18/2011 8:07:00 AM
sweet septmeber remembrances, carrie...… applause for the thrilling win! ..:) huggs
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Date: 9/17/2011 7:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win!!!!!!!!!--------Lori
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Date: 9/17/2011 12:26:00 PM
Carrie, a beauty! Just what I have come to expect from you. Smile. a superb win, worthy of the glory. Congratulations. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/17/2011 12:22:00 PM
Nicely done Carrie. Congratulations
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Date: 9/17/2011 9:55:00 AM
What a beauty! I love the third stanza...the word tiptoeing is a great line. congrats. BG
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Date: 9/17/2011 9:42:00 AM
Carrie, I can see why this stunning poem was a winner. Your imagery is breath taking. This is going into my favorites. Congratulations on your win. Blessings, Connie I am quite a bit behind on the poetry here.
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Date: 9/17/2011 8:44:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Brian, Carrie
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Date: 9/8/2011 1:50:00 AM
Good luck in the "September" poetry contest as Brian judges. CR
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Date: 9/2/2011 1:40:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Carrie. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/2/2011 2:45:00 AM
This is my favourite form Carrie. A beautiful peaceful work. Thank you for your kind comments, you do a great job of painting with words yourself. regards Margaret
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Date: 9/2/2011 1:09:00 AM
Wonderful vivid vibrant colorful write very descriptive lovely Lady Carrie.....good luck on contest....with love....old Jack
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Date: 9/1/2011 10:26:00 PM
So exquisitely written, Carrie! You kept me deeply intrigued throughout the poem, very special! Good luck in the contest!!
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Date: 9/1/2011 9:52:00 PM
Very nicely done, I especially like the final line, so well written. Best of luck in Brian's contest. Lee
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