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September's End

as the morning rose charcoal feathery clouds blended with the ebony backdrop of night the yellow shimmer of the falcate moon offered little light the air was thick with smokey white trails that lifted from damp lawns my mind drifted like tires on asphalt trying to remain grounded on the roadway another gray Monday setting my mood this last day of September memories bled less red than the edges of these clouds as the sun began her rise my thoughts shifted much like this day life towards death then back again the pink splashes in sun's wake reminded me of you and your wake the air chilled me like a kiss from cold lips as they part from life yet memories warmed me like the touch of sun as it beat down from skies that now match the blue of my own eyes the clouds have all faded much like life did from eyes that closed that final time though the trees are changing like the times i see through the green the orange, yellow, red peeking through the edges awaiting to take flight in the wind and spiral down grounded in death the air is thick this morning as i choke on tears held back in remembering September again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/18/2020 1:37:00 PM
I too am sorry that September day was so sad for you but thrilled to see this in the winner's circle because if not, I might never had seen it. Congrats on your win my friend.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/18/2020 7:22:00 PM
Thank you so much Chris... hugs
Date: 10/20/2013 6:27:00 PM
I'm sorry this September day was so sad for you. may color and joy come back. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/16/2013 9:04:00 PM
enjoyed your poem and win....Linda
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Date: 10/16/2013 12:43:00 PM
Ah me Sandra...This suggests the loss of someone very near and dear to you? An elegant, wistful and beautiful write my friend... I am SO glad to see you entering contests and getting the recognition you deserve...From your #1 fan - Tim
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Date: 10/16/2013 11:53:00 AM
Very emotional read....congratulations on your win....
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Date: 10/15/2013 10:03:00 PM
Sandra, you are such an impressing poet.. :) Congratulations! --LOVE-- ~SKAT~
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Date: 10/9/2013 1:37:00 PM
I like your imagery. September has passed away. Good poem
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Date: 10/1/2013 5:25:00 PM
Just beautiful, and heartbreaking! I like all of the metaphors for death and the death of a season. A fantastic picture that you've painted here, Sandra! I loved it!...Thank you very much for reading my poem, and for the nice comments. I really appreciate it!
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Date: 10/1/2013 9:16:00 AM
Stunning!
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Date: 10/1/2013 8:42:00 AM
this is a grand reflection on a single morning....very well done.
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Date: 10/1/2013 8:39:00 AM
The month of November overtakes my all in a similar way. This was a heart-wrenching, reflective writing. Wonderful job!
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Date: 10/1/2013 12:40:00 AM
this must be the one you told me about. I just love it , Sandra. Knowing how special this one is, I must fave it. To tell you the truth, I would have at least half your poems on my fave list, but I think I will wait for you to put all your poems in a book!! And I will buy it!
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Date: 9/30/2013 9:03:00 PM
The memories warmed me like the touch of the sun, enjoyed this sad and moving write, Sandra
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