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September Surprise

This time every year

September, I remember

a special surprise-

Placed into my toddler-arms

my newborn baby brother


September 7, 2022

Contest: Remember September
Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich

Today is his 80th Birthday!
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Delaney Avatar
September 24, 2022 at 3:18 PM
What an armful of joy. Wonderful memory and pic to illustrate that unforgettable moment. Congratulations on your top placement. SuZ
Calasibetta Avatar
September 24, 2022 at 4:10 AM
Aw...how sweet! Congratulations on your win in the contest. :)Paulette
Miller Avatar
September 24, 2022 at 12:25 AM
Congratulations on your winning placement
Dietrich Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 7:45 PM
Sweet as can be. now THIS is a memory. I had a sister also placed in my arms five Septembers after MY birthday. Congrats to you
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