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September Sighs

September Sighs A coolness chilling her heart Her touch faintly feeble A darkness creeping closer Color draining from her cheeks An icy distance in her eyes ©10/12/2022

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Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 9/24/2022 4:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest. You certainly have summed up September with beauty and grace. :)Paulette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/23/2022 7:58:00 PM

Love the personification. is this really what September means to you as memory, John? Had my contest been on descriptions of September, this would have gotten even a higher score! Congrats.

I Am Anaya

Date: 9/13/2022 7:28:00 PM

September she is very welcome here bringing change. Beautiful verse John Lawless. Sept 22 official day of Autumn!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/12/2022 1:43:00 PM

September is going to bring us some changes for sure. I enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for sharing, Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/12/2022 12:45:00 PM

Sad portrait of September. In Malta it is hot and humid but necessary for the production of Maltese wines.