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September Nights

Just after my pears fall off the trees and leaves begin their turning, evening fades to dusk in its anxiety to welcome moon. I sit outside and watch moon glow arise from its sleeping nest. The fresh scent of grilled Salmon and charcoal-baked potatoes, lingers across my patio; the flavors melding upon my taste buds. My cat sits next to me eyeballing scraps and my iced tea and decides to chase the few fireflies while nearby crickets play love songs. The soft, swift chill of dew-laden air causes me to shiver. I breathe in deeply and revel in the thought of blissful colors that will dot the landscape in a few days time. Above me fly a flock of birds in southerly aim as I glance to the pumpkin patch and begin to dream of pumpkin pies and my favorite harvest veggie casserole; autumn nights are a delight to my palette.
9-12-2021 HELLO September Poetry Contest Mystic Rose Rose

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Date: 11/8/2021 6:42:00 AM
A visceral response to the palette of colors and tastes and smells and nuances you have so loving described . I see and feel it all . I love evening fades to dusk in its anxiety to welcome moon . Belated congratulations on your win . Susan :)
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Date: 11/4/2021 7:56:00 AM
You do much more with food smells than I have ever dared; I guess you do it for both of us. "The fresh scent of grilled Salmon and charcoal-baked potatoes, lingers across my patio;" I am salivating.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/7/2021 1:48:00 PM
Thanks, food is an art to be appreciated.
Date: 11/3/2021 11:13:00 AM
Beautiful write as always, September nights, you made them magic, but are you all right, missed you on soup! Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/3/2021 11:59:00 AM
Thanks so much, I had a lot of rennovations this past summer and they are still going on, so it's been a hectic year. Thanks so much.
Date: 10/23/2021 11:37:00 AM
Your "September Nights" is a wonderful story/write. Wish I was there with your grilled Salmon, baked potatoes, pumpkin pies and veggies. Let's eat. Have a blessed autumn day.......................
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/3/2021 11:59:00 AM
It is definitely delicious. thanks.
Date: 10/21/2021 9:16:00 AM
What a marvellous poetic palette and i really enjoyed picturing your cat chasing after fireflies. Do they eat them? Kudos for thjs poem with all its imagery wow! >>>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<~~~~~`¶§ Plz do read and comment my newest poem too
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/3/2021 12:00:00 PM
She has never eaten them, she just enjoys trying to run them out of her yard. Thanks.
Date: 10/4/2021 6:49:00 AM
Oh this is such a warm and relaxing piece. I can see you sitting on the patio with your cat while the grill slowly cooks the salmon and you both wait eagerly for it. Yum. Love it. God Bless, JB
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/3/2021 12:00:00 PM
Thank you, it's my favorite meal.
Date: 9/26/2021 8:18:00 AM
What an amazing visual poem.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/3/2021 12:00:00 PM
Thanks Harry.
Date: 9/20/2021 11:14:00 AM
ML this is a sensory delight of the season all wrapped up in a serene, placid September evening. Congratulations for your win! All the best!
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/3/2021 12:00:00 PM
Thanks so much.
Date: 9/19/2021 3:47:00 PM
what fabulous autumnal imagery and the aromas of the foods is so enticing, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/3/2021 12:01:00 PM
Thank you Jan.
Date: 9/14/2021 2:01:00 PM
Such magnificent verses gifting marvelous imagery and reminding me of my youth some 50 plus years ago. On the farm, living then much closer to the land and Nature. Exceptional poem my friend. A gem and a fav... God bless..
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/3/2021 12:01:00 PM
Many thanks and blessings.
Date: 9/13/2021 1:54:00 PM
How I enjoy your love of nature my friend, i hope for you that you will always be surrounded with beautiful visions and experiences of nature. hugs and blessings Jennifer.
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