Lin Lane Poet Rhyme

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Andrea's September Sestet Contest ~ 9/20/25

September Melodies SS

September strums wistful melodies
as trees bid fond farewell to their leaves.
A chill breeze sends them tumbling down
in shades of crimson, gold and brown.
Twirling like dancers to an autumnal tune,
until upon the ground they are strewn.

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Sara Kendrick October 2, 2025 at 12:25 PM Congratulations on your winning work in Andrea's contest with these expressive and descriptive lines. Way to go. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith September 30, 2025 at 1:02 PM Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write again. I love this pretty month of September with cooler weather and pretty colors. Have a fun day with your win as you go writing away..........

Andrea Dietrich September 30, 2025 at 11:52 AM Pretty picture of twirling leaves, Lin. Thanks for your entry and congrats on the win.

Anne-Lise Andresen September 30, 2025 at 2:08 AM - Congratulations on your wonderful September poem, Lin :) - hugs Lin Lane September 30, 2025 at 6:15 AM Thanks, Anne-Lise. So many got first place and yet your wonderful write didn't. I'll not enter Andrea's contests again. I see friendship wins out and there are only a couple of hosts I'll write for now.

Duke Beaufort September 22, 2025 at 5:06 AM Lin, I agree with the comments below. This has an excellent rhythm. You capture the essence of this month and make it look easy!! Smiles!! Lin Lane September 25, 2025 at 3:13 PM Merci, merci, Duke. I just write what comes to mind. The day I come up blank is the day I lay down my pen.

Hilda Greenhough September 20, 2025 at 6:52 PM I enjoy the lovely rhythm of your poem. It reflects the subtle joy of autumn. Good luck with the contest. Lin Lane September 21, 2025 at 9:23 AM Many thanks, Hilda.

Paula Goldsmith September 20, 2025 at 2:59 PM Your "September" is a wonderful  write with a very pretty picture. Love Both... "Good Luck" We both did this great month. Have a lovely day/weekend writing away.................

Daisy Meadows September 20, 2025 at 3:27 AM A beautiful poem. Well written. Lin Lane September 20, 2025 at 1:23 PM Thanks a lot, Daisy.

Deb M September 20, 2025 at 3:26 AM I love this gorgeous poem Lin…beautifully worded! Debx Lin Lane September 20, 2025 at 1:22 PM Hiya, Deb. Thanks very much.