September Falls

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6.26am Sept. 17,2024

Scintillating smiles spread around, Extravagant gifts of colors abound; Prosperity of raining joy seems endless, Triumphant month fall is here to bless. Exuberant rainbow lays its wide carpets, Mesmerizing leaves in flamboyance pirouettes; Brush of nature shows a non-stop painting on Exquisite landscape where kids are playing, Renders its great masterpiece for you darling. Feel the gentleness of breeze as we dance with glee, Ambiance is great at gardens and under each tree; Leaves are life’s showers of hope, believe me. Lovely deciduousness always opens all doors, Surprising us all of God’s more graces and favors.

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Susan Ashley

Date: 10/6/2024 6:59:00 PM

Dearest Len, my inspiring poetry friend, I am captivated by the golden ambiance of your beautiful poem. I so enjoyed "Ambiance is great at gardens and under each tree;/ Leaves are life’s showers of hope" - so beautifully poetic and heartening! Love the gentle sprinkles of alliterations and the spirit and spice of this lovely Autumn piece. Congratulations for your success in Andrea's contest. Warmest wishes my dear poet friend.. ~Susan

Len Gasun
Date: 10/14/2024 12:56:00 AM

Oh, so grateful belatedly for reading my poem and your uplifting and inspiring words my dearest poet friend Susan. Also, I would like to thank you for the warm congratulatory greetings. I forgot about my win here so I didn't come back. Thank you so much for the warm wishes and every thing. Thank you so much as well my dearest poet friend Susan. Hugs... hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/30/2024 2:45:00 PM

Thanks for entering with this cute poem, Len. Congrats for your win.

Len Gasun
Date: 10/5/2024 3:01:00 AM

Oh, thanks for acknowledging my poem in your contest my dearest poet friend Andrea. I thought this will not place coz of the absence of preliminary commentors but your approval on my poem through my win/placement means a lot to me. God bless you always and your writings endeavor. Hugs...hugs