September Falls


Silver-lined clumps of cloud fleet floats away
End-summer splendor shines in ashen sky
Pairs of joyful birds bathe in the blue bay
The fall’s footsteps trace hued track on the sly
Ember meadow wears crown of diamond dew
Mesmeric dawn gleams finesse of dream glow
Blazing garden path gets paved with gold new	
Empty tree boughs shed bronze leaves rustling slow
Relined spent sun in satin sky sets fire

Falling night sprouts sapphire stars shining bright
Amazed, I roam with mind soaring higher
Long to absorb the moondust with delight
Lilting crisp air spreads out ripples of cheer
Songful my heart hasn’t found yours so much near
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Ashley Avatar
October 26, 2024 at 9:35 AM
Dear Subimal, you vibrant imagery captures Fall in all its beauty and glory! Congratulations for your success in Andrea's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 26, 2024 at 10:09 AM
Thank you, Susan for your read and encouraging comments.
Agustin Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 10:03 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed."
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 11:04 PM
Thank you, Beata for your read and encouraging comments. I believe in God at the core of my soul and want to be blessed.
Dietrich Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 1:45 PM
i like the many references you made to autumn with your September acrostic here, Subimal. Congrats on a well deserved win.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 11:01 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea for the placement and for liking the poem.
Fowler Avatar
September 22, 2024 at 1:45 PM
Lovely depiction of Fall Subimal. :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 22, 2024 at 10:29 PM
Thank you so much, Linda.
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