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September Falls Acrostic sonnet contest Sponsored by Andrea Dietrich <3
Somewhere I hear Earth's ever ticking clock Emptying the grains of Summers’ sandy seas Parting from birds flying South in flocks Time for leaves to fall from ancient trees Eldritch bare branches stretch twisted in the cold Memories like magic spells wafting on the breeze Buoyant leaves flutter by in rich hues of red and gold Energetic, pink cheeked, flannel shirt and comfy jeans Relaxing by the fire spitting sparks Friends scorching tongues on creamy, hot cocoa Another ghost story please in the dark Laughing when we scream at the scarecrow Later the sun says it's begun as earlier the moon has come Soak in the chill and unique feel of Autumn

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Date: 12/17/2024 11:03:00 AM
I’d like to express my appreciation to you Crystal for your heartfelt words on my tribute to my sister Your acrostic is an exemplary work of enduring art. I was especially impressed by your majestic command of imagery and seamless line flow. You sustain the reader with the warm glow of your composition Howard
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Crystol Woods
Date: 12/19/2024 9:16:00 AM
What a thoughtful review, ty! And I'm glad my words had a beneficial effect on you! That's what we are shooting for after all right!? xo
Date: 10/14/2024 6:13:00 PM
Dear Crystol, soulful poet friend, your autumn imagery is a sensory fiesta. Beautiful and sumptuous, and scrumptious especially, "Friends scorching tongues on creamy, hot cocoa". I adored "Memories like magic spells wafting on the breeze" and "Relaxing by the fire spitting sparks", (nice bit of alliteration). But truly every verse is a gem! Your creative golden pen shines! Congratulations for your success in Andrea's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Crystol Woods
Date: 10/15/2024 9:01:00 AM
I cherish each word of encouragement and eagerly hold them in my heart! Ty! Xo
Date: 10/1/2024 3:56:00 AM
Wonderful imagery, Crystol. I really enjoyed your take on September. Well done. Congrats on your placement.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 10/15/2024 9:00:00 AM
Ty Jim! Xo
Date: 9/30/2024 2:28:00 PM
Lots of great fall images in your poem, Crystol. I enjoyed this very much. Congrats in my contest.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 10/1/2024 1:12:00 AM
Thank you! I enjoyed this contest very much, appreciate all your efforts! Ty for my placement, I'm honored! Xoxo
Date: 9/10/2024 8:30:00 PM
Vividly descriptive, appealing acrostic, Crystol. Janice
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Crystol Woods
Date: 9/11/2024 8:15:00 AM
Thank you Janice! Xo
Date: 9/10/2024 8:57:00 AM
Dear Crystol, I love your tribute to September and the beautiful changes that are coming. My favorite season is AUTUMN!! YEAH! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Crystol Woods
Date: 9/11/2024 8:15:00 AM
Mine too Daniel! Although at the start of each new season I think the same thing lol. I'm grateful for all four! Xo
Date: 9/9/2024 1:43:00 PM
What a wonderful "September Falls" write you have here. The cooler weather sounds great to me..... Have a blessed day writing away............
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Crystol Woods
Date: 9/11/2024 8:14:00 AM
Tysm! Xo

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