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SEPTEMBER FALLS

Silhouette of golden sun rays Embraced by melodic moon Pulling off this dance by day Till seducing nights like groom Elegant draft spilling colorful leaf Mahogany trees bend in wind Bathing in daily blue breeze Eve chills that seem not to end Ready for your pumpkin spice Fast from summer’s abuse Alluring amber hearts that fly Love is a hot call for a truce Lullaby of leaves falls from trees September sings soft to me

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Susan Ashley

Date: 10/14/2024 6:28:00 PM

Dear Karen, the lilting beauty of your autumn verse is elegant. I especially enjoyed "Elegant draft spilling colorful leaf/Mahogany trees bend in wind" and "Lullaby of leaves falls from trees/September sings soft to me" - wow! September sings soft to me too. Your golden pen shines, my creative friend! Congratulations for your success in Andrea's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Karen Jones
Date: 10/14/2024 6:45:00 PM

You are kind Susan. Thanks for your warm wishes!

Jim Healey

Date: 10/1/2024 4:06:00 AM

Nice work, Karen. And you figured out how to do bold letters! Now I have to do it! Regards, Jim

Karen Jones
Date: 10/1/2024 5:13:00 AM

Oh no Tom with his patience taught me to bold lol. I would never have figured it out alone! But thanks Jim.

Martin Challender

Date: 10/1/2024 12:31:00 AM

Well done on your September Acrostic! Enjoyed this :)

Karen Jones
Date: 10/1/2024 1:07:00 AM

Thanks for reading Martin!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/30/2024 2:30:00 PM

Lovely fall images, Karen. I love the last two lines for your ending. Congrats.

Karen Jones
Date: 9/30/2024 2:49:00 PM

Thanks for sponsoring a fun contest Andrea and for my placement!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/12/2024 9:06:00 PM

Karen, this is areally beautiful and vividly descriptive poem. I especially love the last line. Janice

Karen Jones
Date: 9/12/2024 9:13:00 PM

Thanks poetess! I enjoyed yours as well.

thriveni c mysore

Date: 9/10/2024 4:21:00 AM

beautiful write dear poet. 'Fast from summer's abuse/ hot call for a truce' amazing. Blessings & best wishes dear poet.

Karen Jones
Date: 9/10/2024 5:05:00 AM

Thank you for your support!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/9/2024 2:24:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your creative "September Falls" write. I cannot wait for the cooler weather. "Good Luck" Have a blessed day writing away............

Karen Jones
Date: 9/9/2024 2:26:00 PM

Thanks for reading and I will miss not being cold! Lol you have a blessed day too

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/9/2024 1:57:00 AM

Incredible. I feel the smoothness of your acrostic, and it is still written with splendid meaning. You are a marvel. Hugs.

Karen Jones
Date: 9/9/2024 2:00:00 AM

Thank you Victor! But Tom helped me immensely in getting the bold format correctly! I love soup poets! Hugs

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/9/2024 12:11:00 AM

Lovely acrostic Karen, you can edit it on your phone, won't let me show you the punctuation marks. Go to my poems in members section and click edit At the start of your poem put an angle bracket then b then close it with an angle bracket At the end of your poem an angle bracket then b then forward slash then close it with an angle bracket, then update poem. It will now be in bold. You'll see the symbols when you go to edit my poem. Any problems soupmail me. Tom

Tom Cunningham
Date: 10/1/2024 12:43:00 AM

You're welcome Martin.

Martin Challender
Date: 10/1/2024 12:33:00 AM

Great tip there Tom. It will certainly change my poetry from now on:) Thanks!

Karen Jones
Date: 9/9/2024 12:24:00 AM

Thanks Tom! You are a sweetheart!

Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/9/2024 12:15:00 AM

Just looked at the contest only the first letter in each sentence has to be in bold not the whole poem. So do each letter and work your way down