September Days

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Poetry/Rhyme/September Days
Copyright Protected, ID 09-1671-114-05
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France
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Written, September 05, 2024
For the International Contest, Rhymes in Nine
Sponsor, Joseph May, Judged 09/27/2024

Second Place

Dead leaves lay still until the wind takes them
here and there: even the last flower withers:
yet, there is a need and beauty in the decay.

Quote by _ Constance

mornings very cool but by noon are like June hot, such a delight, a bright jewel of a summer day; heat so sweet, or so I thought . . . but, the trees and breeze are confused so much, bemused, I wish to keep the pond fish that glide and sway; I fear that Fall will miss nature's call and golden touch . . . those dancing and prancing leaves that drift up to soar, I love watching them creep, leap and shift so gay; oh, sweet heartbeat of two seasons . . . I adore !

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Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 9/27/2024 10:19:00 PM

Beautifully crafted rhyme. Congratulations.

Joseph May

Date: 9/27/2024 12:10:00 PM

Wonderful write Constance, Congrats on your win

Constance La France
Date: 9/27/2024 1:37:00 PM

Joseph, thank you for the contest and my placement, and for the compliment and congrats, appreciate, Constance

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 9/6/2024 7:46:00 AM

Dear Constance, I loved reading this wonderful poem this morning. I love the autumn season and seeing life as it rests or dies and the renewal yet to come. Very Enjoyable! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Constance La France
Date: 9/6/2024 6:28:00 PM

Daniel, thank you for the nice comment, and compliment, blessings, Constance