September

Dawn breaks, the sun awakes- an eerie mist bedecks the stark conifers in a light blue shawl. out of focus at the edge of my gaze bathed in sun a sepia rose haze the draught ends berries rot beneath the bramble sun setting low, Fall in all its golden glow; anticyclones hold transient sway

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Michael Mc Dermott

Date: 9/21/2021 7:44:00 AM

This poem is about the changes that Autumn brings, beyond the splendour of late summer. The poet sees the berries rot, and knows what is to follow when the sun sets.

Brian Strand
Date: 9/22/2021 1:33:00 AM

A very 'verse'atile' month Robett&season

Gary Radice

Date: 9/8/2021 12:21:00 AM

I really enjoy your "Poems of the Month" Brian. This is no exception. Lovely. A short anthology of 12 poems would make for great reading. Cheers - Gary

Brian Strand
Date: 9/8/2021 1:58:00 AM

took up your suggestion Gary& have ejoyed the series..too old for anthologies .other than my PS file.Enjoy the sun today

Ann Gilmour

Date: 9/4/2021 5:13:00 PM

Brian your words sum up perfectly September in the UK. I enjoyed the read and particularly loved 'stark conifers in a light blue shawl' ~ thank you... with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Brian Strand
Date: 9/5/2021 12:03:00 AM

Yes Ann,a transition month in our temperate area.Thanks

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/3/2021 6:03:00 PM

lovely imagery, Brian ~ have a fabulous day ~

Brian Strand
Date: 9/3/2021 11:52:00 PM

Part of monthly series,thnks Line

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/3/2021 2:38:00 AM

I wonder about the anticyclones. I need to look that one up. We are still mostly held by summer but today and tomorrow are supposed to be cooler. I plan on opening the door to enjoy some of the cooler morning since it is supposed to be about 6 or 7 degrees cooler. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/3/2021 2:40:00 AM

Did look anticyclones up. So you are having fine weather. Sara