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Seperate Worlds

Fade to black Shiney stones surface I see your silhouette You are alone I am frozen Moments pass by We stand within the stillness I am your enemy You are my heart Captured essence Innocent smile Hate me later Im only here for awhile I crawl beneath your skin Breathe Moments disappear Silence Then gone

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/10/2016 2:56:00 AM

Amanda Buckner, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. **LINDA**

Skat A

Date: 8/25/2015 11:46:00 PM

AMANDA, Enjoyed this very much... SKAT

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/1/2011 8:21:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Amanda B. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/30/2011 10:02:00 PM

Creative and interesting expressions , Amanda

Jack Ross Jr.

Date: 7/30/2011 6:17:00 PM

very nice write, enjoyed...God bless...old Jack

James Peranteau

Date: 7/30/2011 8:28:00 AM

Another fine write Amanda ! Hope that you mind not, my peeking in on your writes today ! james