Seperate Ways

We walked a while
To gather our thoughts
Our relationship
Has gathered noughts

My fragile heart says
He was the one for me
But its, the where have you been
His quizzing first degree

His jealousy took over
The good times that we had
As he walks away
My heart feels glad

But will i know in the morning
With these second thoughts
Our relationship
Were they all actually noughts




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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
February 27, 2010 at 8:56 AM
An interesting one, James. A nice little read! Luv,Andrea
Alldredge Avatar
February 27, 2010 at 8:29 AM
Well wrote James. Was a lesson learned? I really enjoy reading your work on the soup.
Owens Avatar
February 26, 2010 at 5:52 PM
Very nice poem...enjoyed...Marty
Kendrick Avatar
February 26, 2010 at 5:39 PM
Like the questioning mind at play in this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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