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Seperate Ways

We walked a while To gather our thoughts Our relationship Has gathered noughts My fragile heart says He was the one for me But its, the where have you been His quizzing first degree His jealousy took over The good times that we had As he walks away My heart feels glad But will i know in the morning With these second thoughts Our relationship Were they all actually noughts http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/life-5.php

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Date: 2/27/2010 8:56:00 AM
An interesting one, James. A nice little read! Luv,Andrea
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Date: 2/27/2010 8:29:00 AM
Well wrote James. Was a lesson learned? I really enjoy reading your work on the soup.
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Date: 2/26/2010 5:52:00 PM
Very nice poem...enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 2/26/2010 5:39:00 PM
Like the questioning mind at play in this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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