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Seperate Paths

Holding Hands in parks, Under Carpet Of Bright Stars, and Yellow Moon above. Kissing Under the Lanterne, That was Yesterday's sweet love. Charma

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Bri Brown

Date: 12/2/2009 12:42:00 PM

thank you 4 commenting on so many of my poems. absolutely love, love, love this one.marked as fav now. <3s 2 u_luv bree

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/20/2009 4:54:00 PM

Sounds like a great time in the park. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

James Fraser

Date: 11/20/2009 3:17:00 PM

Tender and sweet piece Charmaine, another little gem from the Maltese Maiden's pen >> James

James Peranteau

Date: 11/20/2009 8:12:00 AM

Once again,..another heart warming poem from Charmaine !!! Loved it !!! james

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 11/20/2009 8:05:00 AM

Dear Charmaine, "Under Carpet Of Bright Stars" How very Romantic I Pray this "sweet love is still with YOU If not meet YOU at in the parks -- Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments ALWAYS YOURS...HG

Jim Marshal

Date: 11/19/2009 2:59:00 PM

Nice work Charmaine, very romantic and evocative. Hope you're well :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/19/2009 11:11:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your splendid writing with us Charmaine. May this week find you in good health and your pen be overflowing with inspiration. Love, Carol

Yoni Dvorkis

Date: 11/19/2009 10:56:00 AM

very sweet thoughts put into this tanka Charma. I like your experimentation with the tanka form, I even caught myself counting syllables:)

K K Iloduba Jnr

Date: 11/19/2009 6:52:00 AM

kissing under the lanterne..........u ve come a long way with words!cheers!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 11/19/2009 12:28:00 AM

And How sweet it sounds in this lovely haiku. Charma, thank you for your comments, poetry contributions, and friendship. God be with you. Lovingly, Dane

Raul Moreno

Date: 11/19/2009 12:11:00 AM

Nice work Charma, great tanka...Raul