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Seperate Paths

Holding Hands in parks,
Under Carpet Of Bright Stars,
and Yellow Moon above.
Kissing Under the Lanterne,
That was Yesterday's sweet love.











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Bri Brown

December 2, 2009 at 12:42 PM

thank you 4 commenting on so many of my poems. absolutely love, love, love this one.marked as fav now. <3s 2 u_luv bree

Sara Kendrick

November 20, 2009 at 4:54 PM

Sounds like a great time in the park. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

James Fraser

November 20, 2009 at 3:17 PM

Tender and sweet piece Charmaine, another little gem from the Maltese Maiden's pen >> James

James Peranteau

November 20, 2009 at 8:12 AM

Once again,..another heart warming poem from Charmaine !!! Loved it !!! james

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

November 20, 2009 at 8:05 AM

Dear Charmaine, "Under Carpet Of Bright Stars" How very Romantic I Pray this "sweet love is still with YOU If not meet YOU at in the parks -- Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments ALWAYS YOURS...HG

Jim Marshal

November 19, 2009 at 2:59 PM

Nice work Charmaine, very romantic and evocative. Hope you're well :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 19, 2009 at 11:11 AM

Thank you for sharing your splendid writing with us Charmaine. May this week find you in good health and your pen be overflowing with inspiration. Love, Carol

Yoni Dvorkis

November 19, 2009 at 10:56 AM

very sweet thoughts put into this tanka Charma. I like your experimentation with the tanka form, I even caught myself counting syllables:)

K K Iloduba Jnr

November 19, 2009 at 6:52 AM

kissing under the lanterne..........u ve come a long way with words!cheers!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

November 19, 2009 at 12:28 AM

And How sweet it sounds in this lovely haiku. Charma, thank you for your comments, poetry contributions, and friendship. God be with you. Lovingly, Dane