Separation of a Seasoned Love

What, if any, shall my love be; if tho is not there in the meadow of our season? Will our love wilt as flowers do in the burning sun without thy water to sip into its roots? Shall we not meet by the tree in the meadow of our love? But, if it is not ordained, how so may it go forth, in the bloom of the day of our meadowed love seasoned? I do miss thee, when we are parted from us, in our meadows; seasoned love.

Separation of a Seasoned Love


Our love is, but, just a separation, 
For just a bit longer from one another. 
For our souls still, 
Danced in the moonlight of our season of love. 

Oh, how I've missed our time 
Spent physically with one another. 
The anticipation of us again in the heavens, 
Exciting the taste of our beauty we had the chance to live. 

My love, until we are reunited;
I shall count the seconds till our harmony; 
And, is together, and once again regained. 
My love for Him is forever eternal, 
Faithful, as the love that once lived here. 

Rest my love, 
May our Lord shine on our beauty, 
And again, by mornings dew;
Shall we be together again?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Staton Avatar
November 16, 2022 at 4:17 AM
Such a sweet romantic write about reciprocated love. I enjoyed reading this poem. It expressed a love that transcends beyond the physical. Take care of yourself. God bless you and those you adore.
Darnell Sr Avatar
November 17, 2022 at 3:47 AM
Hi, Valerie! Thank you so much, m'am. It's about my late wife, I am still in love with this woman. She and I are soulmates. Most of my "love poems" are for my late wife, may she R.I.P. Thanks again for your comment and visit. I hope you and your family have a safe, and warm Thanksgiving! Best of Wishes, William
Sergi Avatar
May 13, 2020 at 8:48 AM
Hi William:A beautiful expression oflove as if Romeo was extolling his love!
Darnell Sr Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 5:38 PM
Hi Ralph, How are you this evening? Thank you for your sentiments. She was a beautiful woman, inside and out. I love Shakespeare. Take care... Best of Wishes, William
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 17, 2019 at 3:32 PM
A lovely heartfelt poem of love and loss my friend. Aloha, Connie : )
Darnell Sr Avatar
November 17, 2019 at 4:09 PM
Thank you Connie. I'm just learning everyone and my poem I really didn't think anyone would get it. I value your critique. Best Wishes William
Teagan Avatar
November 5, 2019 at 10:13 AM
You will see her again. This is such a bittersweet love poem, a beautiful memorial. God bless you, William. And thank you again for featuring my poems on your webpage. Again I'm truly honored.
Darnell Sr Avatar
April 20, 2020 at 5:23 AM
Becca, are you still a member? Or are you just taking a break? I'd love to have you again? If it's ok, let me gather some Becca Teagan poetry. Hope your doing good? Best of Wishes, William
Darnell Sr Avatar
November 5, 2019 at 3:22 PM
Thanks, Becca and yes I will. And, you saw her ending, that's awesome you've noticed? Oh yes, but you'll be there all month. You're getting featured on a few sites. I'm so new to the website thing and this template is so hard to figure out. lol But persistence will avail... My wife deserved that poem and the ending of our seasoned love. Good luck in all aspects of your life. All the Best, William
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 31, 2019 at 6:10 PM
Hello William Darnell Sr. your poem is so sad. Sorry for the loss of your wife. If you need to talk we can do it on Soup mail. Have a nice evening my friend.
Darnell Sr Avatar
April 20, 2020 at 5:13 AM
Hi Darlene, I'm so sorry I haven't seen or responded to you. Please forgive my feebleness? No, it's not sad by far. It's rejoicing our time as I remember her, as we should celebrate our loved one we lost. It's not a time for sadness. Sure, I was sad. But, God needed her more. And, who better to let her go too? But, I appreciate your review. It gives me insight as to how each one of you see it, and makes me become a better writer for the next one. Take care. Best of Wishes, William
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 2:09 PM
I sent you a Soup Mail message. By for now. Have a nice day my friend.
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